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Smart Ass Husband!
Again a great idea poorly developed.
Very enjoyable piece of work
That was both an unusually good and original story with a little light hearted, depreciating sense of humor for this section of Literotica called "Loving Wives".
The usual readers and many of Loving Wives’ authors take their stories and this section ‘oh so seriously’.
Well done don't ever lose your sense of humor and irreverence it is such a delightful and refreshing change from the usual angst ridden stories and their philosophical and analytical commentators.
Good luck with your future writing, I will certainly be following your work with interest.
eNJOYED IT
great story, a new theme well developed. Thank you for the pleasure.
SWIVER
Great Story
I hate cheating! But then again...this is not really cheating at all is it? This is just serious love playing...
Eh! I can't promise I like it.
However, I am not certain so I rated it 5*****.
DWmoroncuck submits
another inane comment - at least no "I hate police" rants though
DWmoroncuck submits
another inane comment - at least no "I hate police" rants though
I'm not even 100% sure I know what just happened in this story.
But, it was clever, sexy and well-written. Mind games at the highest level.
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