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Christmas Time In Shady Pine, USA

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by Angeline12/25/07

It's a dark poem

maybe too dark for my preferences, but it has so many strong narrative features that it's a powerful statement.

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by twelveoone01/01/08

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first stanza the best, interesting use of rhyme, don't know if Shady Pine is a real name, but great town name for the poem. I would do away with "gold and silver in his hair", otherwise this puts the X back in Xmas.

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