All Comments on 'Perfidia'

by MungoParkIII

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
C&C used to be captian & coke, not cum & cry..

Just exactly how many emotions did you want envolved with this story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great but sad

Nice story and detailed descriptions. Sad story though so its an unusual combination with lesbian sex - very creative, I like that. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
sequel to Guitar Freakout, by MungoParkIII

Should have been noted at the top of this story that it's an update on two Guitar Freakout pieces in Lit's Lesbian Sex category. Those yielded some of the best writing within Literotica, although they have not received the accolades due them. Guitar Freakout is sparely written -- nothing overdone -- yet it sets a scene that is unforgettable. But this one? No, I'm sorry: Really disappointing for the author to suggest that these two women could come back together after so many decades only to find that one is dying, and to construct this meeting to be their last. In reality, from that night on, they would be inseparable until the end.

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