You get maximum points for a well written story,your description of intercourse is delightful.
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Anonymous12/31/07
You are
You are supposed to hold your moms bum as you come in her in the missionary position and she is supposed to grip you in a vice like grip with her full thighs.Seriously a very well written and erotic story ,loved every word if it.
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Anonymous12/31/07
HOPE
Hope you are going to write a sequel to this about the three "shipmates".THIS WAS very good.
Very nicely done, well written and scorching hot. Thank you for writing this cuz. I hope there are more chapters to cum,
I love well written incest stories penned by a female's hand( and point of view).
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Anonymous01/01/08
VERY NAUGHTY
But then so was my mum?
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Anonymous01/04/08
WHOA!
can't wait for part two!!!!
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Anonymous02/11/08
Why
Is it that all the best stories on this particular subject are written by women,and I am not just talking about this site.Could it be that the Jocasta complex is not such a myth.
I was a bit confused by your Preface, with its repeated words and lack of proper punctuation. I feared then that your story might be difficult to read. Sadly my fears were founded - and it proved too fractured to enjoy. Then when I reached the line; "I know that you don't sleep naked so just was it that you were doing?"
I reread the sentence a couple of times before realising I had to insert my own word 'WHAT' to make any sense of the line. Its a pity. Your story has potential. I'd suggest you go over and correct it, or have it proofed-read and resubmit it.
English
I assume this is fiction
You get maximum points for a well written story,your description of intercourse is delightful.
You are
You are supposed to hold your moms bum as you come in her in the missionary position and she is supposed to grip you in a vice like grip with her full thighs.Seriously a very well written and erotic story ,loved every word if it.
HOPE
Hope you are going to write a sequel to this about the three "shipmates".THIS WAS very good.
Incest erotica at its best!
Very nicely done, well written and scorching hot. Thank you for writing this cuz. I hope there are more chapters to cum,
I love well written incest stories penned by a female's hand( and point of view).
VERY NAUGHTY
But then so was my mum?
WHOA!
can't wait for part two!!!!
Why
Is it that all the best stories on this particular subject are written by women,and I am not just talking about this site.Could it be that the Jocasta complex is not such a myth.
More Good Stuff!
Cuz, your stories are always exciting. This was one of the better ones that I have read on this site. Thanks for sharing it with us.
You write GREAT sexy scenes...
Please keep writing... Ace
Add a second chapter
Nice start... How about going into what happened on those five joy filled days?
Sorry, you forced me to give up.
I was a bit confused by your Preface, with its repeated words and lack of proper punctuation. I feared then that your story might be difficult to read. Sadly my fears were founded - and it proved too fractured to enjoy. Then when I reached the line; "I know that you don't sleep naked so just was it that you were doing?"
I reread the sentence a couple of times before realising I had to insert my own word 'WHAT' to make any sense of the line. Its a pity. Your story has potential. I'd suggest you go over and correct it, or have it proofed-read and resubmit it.
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