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by Bill_the_Butcher

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vixxxxvixxxxalmost 15 years ago
Beautifully sensuous

I love the detail you go into about the sensations of each others' bodies. Hot and well-crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Awesome!

All your stories are awesome (I haven't read you poems), and this is no exception. Nicely done!

One Suggestion: I suggest you mention a condom. I know it's not very erotic, but it's important. Just a suggestion!

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