All Comments on 'Sexual Healing'

by TTMarie

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ethanjones1943ethanjones1943over 16 years ago
more please

more please I loved the first part

Ethan

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
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A very well written beginning Marie. But, why so short? No time or just to tease your readers? The lack of physical descriptions is almost refreshing, but some are needed to set the mood and place. It seems like you intend to extend this with more chapters. Please make them longer, much longer. I need time to stroke my own cock as you paint the picture for me to jack off to. Hope to see more and shoot off with you soon.

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