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by Anonymous

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by champagne198212/28/07

Montana, BC or SA?

It doesn't matter, you could even be sitting in the NWT and this poem would still be gorgeous. I especially like the way your glove liners braid ... neat imagery.

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by Angeline12/28/07

This is just lovely

really a beautiful little poem like a polished gem. So sensual and evocative. Your words made me feel it; that's a very good thing. :-)

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by steve porter12/28/07

A perfect vision...

...I almost feel like I shook you in a snowglobe and then set you down to watch. Thanks.

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by LeBroz12/28/07

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So softly and sweetly romantic at the start; but that last line's a shocker — that'd take a heap 'o hot wild lust to overcome so many minus degrees!

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