i love impregnation storys, no matter if incest or not, keep it up i love see what else you can come up with.
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Anonymous11/09/08
oh wow
OMG That was hella hot! nice way of writing it up! I really love this story! Thanks for shairing!
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Anonymous12/11/08
sad
this story is just sad, it's so stupid and idiotic. i like most incest/taboo but definately NOT this one
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Anonymous01/21/09
WTF
the writter of this needs some mental help. i like some of the insest stories and all but this one just made me sick.
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Anonymous01/21/09
WTF
this made me sick
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Anonymous01/21/09
hell no
this just an't right man. although well written, but its going a little to far for my tasts.
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Anonymous03/17/09
um....
you are a great writer and such a story is amazing to see. But the concept of this fiction is sickening. What person would follow that? I know every man and woman has the right to do as they wish and write what they want but this is just too weird. I would love to read another one of yours. Something so unusual is a talent most don't have.
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Anonymous06/25/09
For people who is commenting
Guys, you are in an incest section of a porn story site. And you comment the writer is sick? Is it only me seeing the irony or are you all blind? If this is sick, maybe stop searching the internet for incest. You can't cross that line and pretend to be offended and what not.
Good story.
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Anonymous06/26/09
Cult
This shouldn't be under incest though, it's barely even about incest. It should be in a section for cults. Well written, but absolutely not what people are looking for in this section.
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Anonymous10/08/09
thank u
i was skeptical at first but i really liked it. i thought it was well writtin n its the best ive read in awhile. thank you. made my night lol
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Anonymous10/09/09
An interesting concept
This story was very imaginative and it's different to the vast majority of stories under the incest topic. It was also believable. My only dislike was that it was a bit short...perhaps there could be a sequel about the congregation's turn?
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Anonymous12/30/09
Interesting
it was kinda wierd...but i cant judge since i like incest. i still liked it though and it wouldve been better if it was longer, more specifically continue where you left off with everyone surrounding her cause to tell you the truth i think everyone loves a good gangbang. or is that just me?
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Anonymous07/22/11
lol all the "christians" getting offended:
you are perving over incest...you hypocrites! You know religion is a breeding ground for sexual repression and abuse...why is this such a stretch.
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Anonymous08/16/11
sick rony sick
Rony needs help
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Anonymous09/25/11
Well done
Gosh! I loved the fact that not only is he her grandfather but also her father!! Tee hee! You captured the mormon compound life really well, they brainwash a their women by feeding them soothing, comforting lies and the women believe it because they are illiterate. I enjoyed your story I really did. Normally I would have felt disgusted at enjoying polygamy, but thank god for Literotca rule of all characters being over 18.
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Anonymous12/12/12
Bad Story
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Anonymous07/19/14
Would like to read more
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Anonymous10/31/14
crap
Ritual rape. I've no problem with incest with both being consenting adults with free choice and no pressure. Family, religion, or an employer can exert a lot of pressure. And with no risk of children, since there is an enhanced chance of birth defects, and the unborn child would be under a stigma by birth not of his choice and no way to rectify it. But this is a family that does nothing but raise daughters as broodmares or temple prostitutes. Bad writing.
on the right track
i love impregnation storys, no matter if incest or not, keep it up i love see what else you can come up with.
oh wow
OMG That was hella hot! nice way of writing it up! I really love this story! Thanks for shairing!
sad
this story is just sad, it's so stupid and idiotic. i like most incest/taboo but definately NOT this one
WTF
the writter of this needs some mental help. i like some of the insest stories and all but this one just made me sick.
WTF
this made me sick
hell no
this just an't right man. although well written, but its going a little to far for my tasts.
um....
you are a great writer and such a story is amazing to see. But the concept of this fiction is sickening. What person would follow that? I know every man and woman has the right to do as they wish and write what they want but this is just too weird. I would love to read another one of yours. Something so unusual is a talent most don't have.
For people who is commenting
Guys, you are in an incest section of a porn story site. And you comment the writer is sick? Is it only me seeing the irony or are you all blind? If this is sick, maybe stop searching the internet for incest. You can't cross that line and pretend to be offended and what not.
Good story.
Cult
This shouldn't be under incest though, it's barely even about incest. It should be in a section for cults. Well written, but absolutely not what people are looking for in this section.
thank u
i was skeptical at first but i really liked it. i thought it was well writtin n its the best ive read in awhile. thank you. made my night lol
An interesting concept
This story was very imaginative and it's different to the vast majority of stories under the incest topic. It was also believable. My only dislike was that it was a bit short...perhaps there could be a sequel about the congregation's turn?
Interesting
it was kinda wierd...but i cant judge since i like incest. i still liked it though and it wouldve been better if it was longer, more specifically continue where you left off with everyone surrounding her cause to tell you the truth i think everyone loves a good gangbang. or is that just me?
lol all the "christians" getting offended:
you are perving over incest...you hypocrites! You know religion is a breeding ground for sexual repression and abuse...why is this such a stretch.
sick rony sick
Rony needs help
Well done
Gosh! I loved the fact that not only is he her grandfather but also her father!! Tee hee! You captured the mormon compound life really well, they brainwash a their women by feeding them soothing, comforting lies and the women believe it because they are illiterate. I enjoyed your story I really did. Normally I would have felt disgusted at enjoying polygamy, but thank god for Literotca rule of all characters being over 18.
Bad Story
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Would like to read more
crap
Ritual rape. I've no problem with incest with both being consenting adults with free choice and no pressure. Family, religion, or an employer can exert a lot of pressure. And with no risk of children, since there is an enhanced chance of birth defects, and the unborn child would be under a stigma by birth not of his choice and no way to rectify it. But this is a family that does nothing but raise daughters as broodmares or temple prostitutes. Bad writing.
Movie on telly?
I saw a movie on telly called 'The Prophet' with Denehy playing the prophet...This should be under cults yes..I did not enjoy it as much..Sorry😞😡
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