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by puffin0901/03/08

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in need of serious editing!!!

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by Anonymous01/04/08

What the first poster wrote...

You've got a really good idea, but it felt pretty choppy. Get a good editor/proofreader & then resubmit this story. I've got a feeling that you have a winner here if it can just be tweaked.

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