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RoniBRoniBover 16 years ago
numb with the pleasure of erotic fulfilment

Fucked, or sucked/fingered/breathed on/squeezed, until you're 'numb' ... i don't think i've been there yet. Either my body won't allow it, or i've had the wrong lovers. I'm going with the latter. This piece is erotic to me because you've taken me INTO you, so to speak. I can't tell what is "provocative" about the affair, and i suppose that is left to me to fill in the blank -- i could be wrong. I like the "urging" to lubricate: rather than "made me begin to get wet" .. the urging is almost ethereal. So, i'm saying this one works very well.

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