All Comments on 'Visiting Cousin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not very good

RichardS50RichardS50over 16 years ago

Although it was quick and over too soon, but then again I guess for all of us our first fuck was over too soon! Wish I had had a cousin for my first fuck!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

Good story line here, lots of possibilities, but you suddenly rushed to the end, just when you should have taken your time and made the story longer by adding more detail...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
She's to slutty for my tastes

She was to slutty for my liking.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
over to fast

I'd like to see more with her but yeah over a little to fast

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Funny how she's on top and then suddenly he collapses on her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Eh

I don't think the tip of your dick would be the size of a tennis ball.

maxsteelemaxsteeleabout 5 years ago
You have made another masterpiece.

You have started a new series here and from the getgo it was a pot of gold. Looking forward to reading the other two stories, which even though they are your last two stories, I'm sure they are both very well written. Is there any chance you will come back and finish loose ends in your other stories though? Will love to see more stories from you and conclusions in others.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
What an awesome Cousin!

Can’t wait for the next chapter,

Two week fuck feast .

Best cousin EVER

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I'm just a guy trying to make a hobby. I wrote word-porn in my early years. That's what got me off at the time. I cringe when I read my stories from years ago. Seriously, this is my reaction reading my earlier works. http://gif-central.blogspot.com/2013/06/cringe.html That sa...

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