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December Caoinim

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by twelveoone01/01/08

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one reason contests suck, well done, forgiven for the obvious cliched, because of the style

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by LeBroz01/01/08

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Like this better after your tweaking of the contest piece. Using december as a metaphor makes the month so much more somber.

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