Thank you for a romantic, sexy, warm, friendly and exciting story of two people enjoying themselves together while reconstructing their lives, together, into one that works beautifully for both of them.
In fact, your stories are always a joy to read.
A worthy continuation to the first chapter. Needs to be continued further don't you think? Pete.
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Anonymous05/30/08
Great
I could easily handle another chapter or two, feel free to make me happy!
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Anonymous07/08/09
More, please?
Great story! I agree with some of the other comments on here, this is in need of a few extra chapters ... Perhaps involving some of the guests to the lodge?
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Anonymous12/13/09
A good story but
there are certain elements that keep recurring in your stories such as - jeans - cowboy boots - check shirts - and there is a definite over-riding feeling of wanting to always dominate the woman right from the start of a relationship. WHY? Also the way the guys speak is very brusque and staccato statements like a list of rules being given out. Were you ever an officer in the military and enjoyed dishing out the orders to new recruits as that is what comes across in several of your stories, as good as they are and some nice story-lines they all leave me wondering are you a Socio-path???
Ch2 was a fitting continuation for this story. He comes across as a man of few words rather than a domineering sociopath. From "downsized" to upsized" = cutesy, I like it.
why portray him as a chauvinistic pig dishing out commands instead of requests....talks like he is in the army giving orders to new recruits....no way to talk to any women...his head is so far up his own arse that every time he smiles he has shit on his teeth.......portrayed as far too arrogant and full of bullshit....a total prick.....
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I've been Downsized
Having been downsized, I can understand the changes.
Hopefully we will hear more of their adventures.
Happy story for a chilly winter day
Thank you for a romantic, sexy, warm, friendly and exciting story of two people enjoying themselves together while reconstructing their lives, together, into one that works beautifully for both of them.
In fact, your stories are always a joy to read.
Great!!
A worthy continuation to the first chapter. Needs to be continued further don't you think? Pete.
Great
I could easily handle another chapter or two, feel free to make me happy!
More, please?
Great story! I agree with some of the other comments on here, this is in need of a few extra chapters ... Perhaps involving some of the guests to the lodge?
A good story but
there are certain elements that keep recurring in your stories such as - jeans - cowboy boots - check shirts - and there is a definite over-riding feeling of wanting to always dominate the woman right from the start of a relationship. WHY? Also the way the guys speak is very brusque and staccato statements like a list of rules being given out. Were you ever an officer in the military and enjoyed dishing out the orders to new recruits as that is what comes across in several of your stories, as good as they are and some nice story-lines they all leave me wondering are you a Socio-path???
As always
Scorpio this was great. I have enjoyed several of your stories. Keep going...
Simple - Thanks !!
A lot lol
You have to add text here too
Yep.
Ch2 was a fitting continuation for this story. He comes across as a man of few words rather than a domineering sociopath. From "downsized" to upsized" = cutesy, I like it.
Maybe a chapter 3.?
chpt 3
Continue on....maybe start a late family?
Love this
Spool good!!!
basically a good story but
why portray him as a chauvinistic pig dishing out commands instead of requests....talks like he is in the army giving orders to new recruits....no way to talk to any women...his head is so far up his own arse that every time he smiles he has shit on his teeth.......portrayed as far too arrogant and full of bullshit....a total prick.....
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