All Comments on 'Brother Sister Ch. 02'

Damn. I hope there is a Chapter 3!

I think we need to have parents get involved but please, no stupid plot twist about them being related or the kids being adopted.

Hot tale, Nikki. Tell us more!

Super great story! Hurry with more!

Much better than chapter 1; I didn't really enjoy her fucking everybody and their dog. I hope you add an emotional element to their relationship.

Loved all of it ... including blowing and playing with people she shouldn't. That's what it's all about, right??

much better than chapter 1 in my opinion. i didnt enjoy her fuckin everyone. cant waitfor chapter 3 and find out how they deal with what just happend

Its great i hope theres a ch.3 and hope she get pregnant with her brothers baby and cut down on fucking everyone

I liked the way you built Bec into the hot little slut she became in this story. I think it's time she discovered sex with another female as an added dimension to her raunchy sexuality. Maybe she will become hooked on squirting orgasms when her brother continually homes in on her G-spot

I love the way you put the story together and I hope you continue with another chapter or two. I've been going through all of your stories and you're a truly talented author.

Really love this and hoping for a chapter 3! I'm picturing him getting to fuck that ass of hers yet!

Great sexy writing Nikki. Anxiously waiting for more

This was really good. I liked how despite things progressing quite far between them in the first part, they were always arrested by his plasters. That made the scene where she's stripping for him once his plasters were off all the more arousing.

I really like chapter one and chapter two. They're always a great read.

please write more i want to see what happens in the end with Bec and Matt it made me soo wet and now i got a new toy to play with thank you for the idea

I loved every bit of part 1 and part 2. Don't keep us waiting too long part 3! I hope that the hint at anal play is delivered on... (so hot!).

Bec's sexual awakening is really interesting. Unlike some other comments, I really like her adventures on the side and would be happy to see more.

Terrific story. It felt real to me.

LOved it!! Hope Thers MOre to CUm... lol

and this is definitely one of them!! more like this please!

I HOPE! Maybe have the parents get home having had a sexual fiesta in Europe with several families including teens...wanting to figure out how to involve their children in their activities...also finding out that Bec has gotten pregnant by Matt...

MORE PLEASE THAT WAS SO HOT !!!!!

That was fantastic. More please

Much much better than previous part :) It IS named Brother Sister, not Brother Sister And Anyone But The Dog. :)

Well I liked it just would like to know what happens and if she will be with him and only him as a lover for life ... I mean write more ....its not over ...its never over

Nikki ur so wicked, I luv all ur stories. This one is so HOT, please write more to this story.

I severly hope you write more stories like this one your a fucking amazing writer

Fantastic!Very hot!Will she be pregnant?One more chapter plse plse!!

shit he went and did it, she just have to pray that she's not on her bad days

I love your stories and I want another chapter for this one. Does she get pregnant or not? the only bad thing I can say about it is that it isnt finished.

you should get the to foreplay at one point - since he was all tied up - its her turn to feel helpless :) think it would suit the story well

What a great story! Thanks for the second chapter. I wondered what would happen when his casts were off and his hands were free. Thanks, too, for giving this young man some chest hair between his pecs!

Gross, why would he bother with that used rag?

But let me make a few mild criticisms. Now, I am not being malicious but I want to mention a few things. First, if he had casts on both arms, how did he dry himself? And I don't think that you mentioned until late in the story that he has a hand free so I guess that is how he fed himself. I did NOT go back to the start to check if he had the hand free then, I am not trying to trap you, I just wanted to correct a few things. Now, his loving sister Bec is a fool, she was fucking Josh regularly then she fucked her brother then she fucked Mark, John and that bastard George. How in the hell could she trust each of them to pull out every time and to not come in her? Also, being a nurse, I will point out that you can get pregnant any time while being fucked bareback if you are not on the pill. Cum slips out all the time and most of it is potent. So, she was not using rubbers, was not on the pill. The pull-out method is responsible for more pregnancies than any other one except the making no attempt to prevent pregnancy at all (as she and Matt did on the last fuck). Now, I did not say all this to be a horse's ass although it may seem that way. I just know that you would wish to be as accurate as possible in your work. I really enjoy your stories and thank you for writing.

Please will there be a continuation of this story or are you going to leave us hanging in suspense for the rest of eternity?

I enjoy all of your stories even this one! You need to reread them a couple times you do end up mixing up the names at some points but its not big deal just an observation please keep writing!!!

Did she ever make a third chapter?

plus if he had casts on his hand and arm they wouls still need to be treated carefully after the casts came off other wise he could rebreak them EASILY. he would need physical therapyfor months and would need to becareful for several months after the casts came off. all in all a total fail especially since you FAILED to finish it.

I've seen the comments asking about how Matt dried himself and the sensitivity of his hands immediately post taking off the cast. I submit that these complaints are a bit out of whack. Let's face it, it's a pornographic story about a brother and sister fucking each other silly. The whole premise is a bit out of whack. I'm willing to forgive a few medical and logistical discrepancies in order to better ger my wank on.

As for this volume, I would say that, on it's own, it would do precious little for my arousal. But combined with the previous chapter, it becomes a great epilogue to a hot story. It's almost like a special feature added to a hot porno DVD. It did a great job of ensuring that I would go to bed a ll hot and bothered tonight. I wish that I had rabidly horny sister like Bec.

There is just enough reality in this fantasy to make it believable. However, having actually had my arms out of commission at the same time I do see some glareingly obvious problems here. Dressing and undressing, turning on and adjusting the water, drying himself, eating, and eating pussy while she is on her back. If he can't use his arms/hands she probably should be lying on her side or sitting on her face. Fucking is difficult in the missionary position or doggie style also. The best are the spooning position on their sides and him behind her, or Cowgirl where she has great control and penetration. Her bathing him in the shower is exactly right. My outpatient therapist used to come over wearing her bikini under her scrubs when it was my shower day. About all he can do for himself is watch TV. The sex in a situation like this is awesome. When medicare stopped paying for the therapist to visit, my mother had to help me shower. She felt bad that I couldn't masturbate. This was 30yrs ago and we are still showering together and keeping each other satisfied, plus we have three kids!

wonderful story please add more soon

I hope he nocked her up a little romance would be great to maybe they become a couple.

Very good read...liked the story....

please continue this one, we need a conclusion !

Just need to reach its climax in part 3 !

This was by far a better chapter, no slutty whorish behaviour. now all you have to do is finish this story off with one final chapter. If the ending of the last chapter is anything to go by, I hope she does end up with a belly full of arms and legs and they realise just how much they do love each other..can't wait to see which way you go with this...the suspense is killing me..

This story shouldn't be over - finish about her become a mommy due to incest.

need to read more please, what happens now? Surely in these times she would be using birth control before getting sexually active.

More please. You can't leave us this close to cumming and just stop. A few more chapters like that one. All she needs is her loving brother.

Does she get pregnant by her brother? Did she want to get pregnant by him?

PLEASE write the next chapter - I'm dying to find out! :)

Oh, Yeah - I almost forgot, Great story!

SHE FINALLY CAME WITH A COCK IN HER PUSSY! YAY, HARD TO BELIEVE AND I'D JUST COMMENTED ON THIS FROM THE LAST STORY. lol

but let's face it sissy was a scum of the earth slut. I wouldn't touch that whore with a 10 foot pole. STD central! LOL!!!

At least you redeemed yourself somewhat, this was a much better chapter than the first, by far. Especially the ending. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter to see if she is in fact pregnant...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Really liked the story. Some may think she was slutty, but I don’t. She curious and enjoys giving and receiving pleasure. If the story had been about an injured girl being cared for by her brother, would he be called a man-whore for having sex with three girls? No! But if a girl has the same urges and curiosity, she’s labeled a whore and a slut. I like her! Giles Tompkins

....what happened next ?

Please finish this properly !

Rapier

What was the point of the gang in the first story? Did not add to story and only upped word count

I want to hear more about Matt and Bec. She is one sexy sister. I think she can help Matt to become every woman’s dream lover. She can teach him all the secret pleasures locked away in the female body. I want to learn along with him as she teaches him how to truly please a woman.

PLEASE finish this story off! Written prefectly but Needs an ending Please!!!

We need more of these two! So fucking hot. Hope she gives up the gang bangs and sticks to her brother.

Would like more and make it into a porno

Would love for tjem to keep going, given her azs to her brother and then go off to college and she shares her brother with her hot girl friends..

please finish this story

wonderful but maybe the fact she is pregnant will be an excellant story idea for chapter 3 and then continue with the story about the children(twins) growing up and getting into their own sexual life and they have children the story goes on

Ch 1 was way too much of a whore story 2 stars for that one. I hope bro knocked her up!

Read chapter 1 up until the group sex skipped over that as it didn't make sense as part of the story. Liked chapter 2 as far as it went. There doesn't seem to be any romance between the siblings can't even remember them kissing. So just a sibling sex story then.

Writing was excellent and the story premise was good. Some minor missing attention to detail like the bathing in chapter 1, how did Matt get the plastic bags off his arms when Bec twice ran out of the bathroom leaving him alone.

Overall a good well written story.

One last thing, I wonder how Matt would feel when he finds out what a slut his sister is can you imagine him meeting Josh in the street and Josh recounting the story to Matt.

Great story. I wish chapter 3 existed

Hope you do a chapter 3 of this story

... but I would like to see some love develop between them. I'm glad that the slut went away.

We need more chapters. Please keep it going. Great story. Was fun reading. T Y

this is probably the best so far but the story of Nikki and Ed is not far behind, at all! Thank you for having such a dirty mind, lol. Made me so hard reading this one.

What a story z.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

Why would she even be remotely worried about her brother coming in her, not like every other guy in town hasn't been blowing their load in her in the last week, ROFL!

And damn dude, you blew half the load in her already, might as well finish and actually enjoy the orgasm instead of ruining it half way thru!

Fair payback anyway for her pulling off you in the middle of fucking you just because she decided that was the perfect time to give you a fucking hairbrush masterbation show, lol. Then, when done, doesn't even have the decency to finish fucking you, just gives you a lousy blowjob! Damn!

If she gets knocked up she can blame it on that bastard that raped her ass, he can pay c child support and be happy doing so without a paternity test, otherwise she'll get her two witnesses to testify he raped her ass and throw his ass in prison!

Almost hope one of those three knocked her up though, she had perfectly good brother dick at home ;)

there was so much of "taking it home" and "hitting it home". bit of a turn off if you ask me

Is there going to be another chapter?

Shoot!

Another story without an end.🥵

Bill

(10/6/2021) Oh, come on now!! Only two pages? It's been thirteen years since publishing this chapter. This is no way to end this narrative. There is so much potential here for a GREAT series.

As I've said before I love your stories, but it would be nice to have a finish to this. I have said before that a story will always bring itself to a close, and Nickie this hasn't got there yet ,but what there is is definitely a five star story.

The author is probably dead, no other reason to leave a good story unfinished.

Poor old Matt can't do anything with his hands....Who aims his erect penis when he needs to piss ? Who wipes his ass ? Who makes his food...or dresses him after he gets out of the tub ? Maybe you couldn't figure that out , so you quit @ only 2 pages . You could've let your friend Jess do all of the dirty work....right ? QUITTER !

Welcome back and thank you, Nikki!

A 3RD

She gets pregnant ends up breaking her arms and has to take care of her, he doesn't have a girlfriend just the 2 of them.

I wish there was more of these two... Loved it...

Five stars Nikki

This kind of brought the story home, but ended on a cliffhanger, so to speak. Nice to have the focus swing back to our "category couple" but we are not really finishing here, there is emotional and sexual ground yet to cover.

I do so enjoy your writing Nikki, yes they are works of fiction but they have the feel of reality to them. I'm only going to keep repeating myself so ill just say thank you.

The story needs more chapters.

With Erica to enhance the story line.

Brisbane 4128.

MORE! Please