Its great i hope theres a ch.3 and hope she get pregnant with her brothers baby and cut down on fucking everyone
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Anonymous02/25/09
Bec is a hot little slut
I liked the way you built Bec into the hot little slut she became in this story. I think it's time she discovered sex with another female as an added dimension to her raunchy sexuality. Maybe she will become hooked on squirting orgasms when her brother continually homes in on her G-spot
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Anonymous02/26/09
Epic
I love the way you put the story together and I hope you continue with another chapter or two. I've been going through all of your stories and you're a truly talented author.
Really love this and hoping for a chapter 3! I'm picturing him getting to fuck that ass of hers yet!
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Anonymous05/18/09
awesome
Great sexy writing Nikki. Anxiously waiting for more
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Anonymous06/14/09
Loved it
This was really good. I liked how despite things progressing quite far between them in the first part, they were always arrested by his plasters. That made the scene where she's stripping for him once his plasters were off all the more arousing.
I really like chapter one and chapter two. They're always a great read.
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Anonymous03/24/10
please write more i want to see what happens in the end with Bec and Matt it made me soo wet and now i got a new toy to play with thank you for the idea
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Anonymous05/16/10
just excellent. we need more!
I loved every bit of part 1 and part 2. Don't keep us waiting too long part 3! I hope that the hint at anal play is delivered on... (so hot!).
Bec's sexual awakening is really interesting. Unlike some other comments, I really like her adventures on the side and would be happy to see more.
I HOPE! Maybe have the parents get home having had a sexual fiesta in Europe with several families including teens...wanting to figure out how to involve their children in their activities...also finding out that Bec has gotten pregnant by Matt...
Much much better than previous part :) It IS named Brother Sister, not Brother Sister And Anyone But The Dog. :)
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Anonymous01/27/12
kool
Well I liked it just would like to know what happens and if she will be with him and only him as a lover for life ... I mean write more ....its not over ...its never over
I severly hope you write more stories like this one your a fucking amazing writer
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Anonymous08/15/12
SISTERLUV
Fantastic!Very hot!Will she be pregnant?One more chapter plse plse!!
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Anonymous09/05/12
ohh crap
shit he went and did it, she just have to pray that she's not on her bad days
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Anonymous11/18/12
Want MORE
I love your stories and I want another chapter for this one. Does she get pregnant or not? the only bad thing I can say about it is that it isnt finished.
you should get the to foreplay at one point - since he was all tied up - its her turn to feel helpless :) think it would suit the story well
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Anonymous01/01/13
Love the story
What a great story! Thanks for the second chapter. I wondered what would happen when his casts were off and his hands were free. Thanks, too, for giving this young man some chest hair between his pecs!
But let me make a few mild criticisms. Now, I am not being malicious but I want to mention a few things. First, if he had casts on both arms, how did he dry himself? And I don't think that you mentioned until late in the story that he has a hand free so I guess that is how he fed himself. I did NOT go back to the start to check if he had the hand free then, I am not trying to trap you, I just wanted to correct a few things. Now, his loving sister Bec is a fool, she was fucking Josh regularly then she fucked her brother then she fucked Mark, John and that bastard George. How in the hell could she trust each of them to pull out every time and to not come in her? Also, being a nurse, I will point out that you can get pregnant any time while being fucked bareback if you are not on the pill. Cum slips out all the time and most of it is potent. So, she was not using rubbers, was not on the pill. The pull-out method is responsible for more pregnancies than any other one except the making no attempt to prevent pregnancy at all (as she and Matt did on the last fuck). Now, I did not say all this to be a horse's ass although it may seem that way. I just know that you would wish to be as accurate as possible in your work. I really enjoy your stories and thank you for writing.
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Anonymous09/06/13
Matt/Bec
Please will there be a continuation of this story or are you going to leave us hanging in suspense for the rest of eternity?
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Anonymous09/15/13
I enjoy all of your stories even this one! You need to reread them a couple times you do end up mixing up the names at some points but its not big deal just an observation please keep writing!!!
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Anonymous01/15/14
Did she ever make a third chapter?
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Anonymous02/16/14
HAVE TO AGREE WITH BEFREETORUN
plus if he had casts on his hand and arm they wouls still need to be treated carefully after the casts came off other wise he could rebreak them EASILY. he would need physical therapyfor months and would need to becareful for several months after the casts came off. all in all a total fail especially since you FAILED to finish it.
I've seen the comments asking about how Matt dried himself and the sensitivity of his hands immediately post taking off the cast. I submit that these complaints are a bit out of whack. Let's face it, it's a pornographic story about a brother and sister fucking each other silly. The whole premise is a bit out of whack. I'm willing to forgive a few medical and logistical discrepancies in order to better ger my wank on.
As for this volume, I would say that, on it's own, it would do precious little for my arousal. But combined with the previous chapter, it becomes a great epilogue to a hot story. It's almost like a special feature added to a hot porno DVD. It did a great job of ensuring that I would go to bed a ll hot and bothered tonight. I wish that I had rabidly horny sister like Bec.
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Anonymous11/24/14
fantasy
There is just enough reality in this fantasy to make it believable. However, having actually had my arms out of commission at the same time I do see some glareingly obvious problems here. Dressing and undressing, turning on and adjusting the water, drying himself, eating, and eating pussy while she is on her back. If he can't use his arms/hands she probably should be lying on her side or sitting on her face. Fucking is difficult in the missionary position or doggie style also. The best are the spooning position on their sides and him behind her, or Cowgirl where she has great control and penetration. Her bathing him in the shower is exactly right. My outpatient therapist used to come over wearing her bikini under her scrubs when it was my shower day. About all he can do for himself is watch TV. The sex in a situation like this is awesome. When medicare stopped paying for the therapist to visit, my mother had to help me shower. She felt bad that I couldn't masturbate. This was 30yrs ago and we are still showering together and keeping each other satisfied, plus we have three kids!
This was by far a better chapter, no slutty whorish behaviour. now all you have to do is finish this story off with one final chapter. If the ending of the last chapter is anything to go by, I hope she does end up with a belly full of arms and legs and they realise just how much they do love each other..can't wait to see which way you go with this...the suspense is killing me..
English
well
Damn. I hope there is a Chapter 3!
need others
I think we need to have parents get involved but please, no stupid plot twist about them being related or the kids being adopted.
Loved It!
Hot tale, Nikki. Tell us more!
So hot!
Super great story! Hurry with more!
Hot!
Much better than chapter 1; I didn't really enjoy her fucking everybody and their dog. I hope you add an emotional element to their relationship.
Fantastic!
Loved all of it ... including blowing and playing with people she shouldn't. That's what it's all about, right??
great
much better than chapter 1 in my opinion. i didnt enjoy her fuckin everyone. cant waitfor chapter 3 and find out how they deal with what just happend
great
Its great i hope theres a ch.3 and hope she get pregnant with her brothers baby and cut down on fucking everyone
Bec is a hot little slut
I liked the way you built Bec into the hot little slut she became in this story. I think it's time she discovered sex with another female as an added dimension to her raunchy sexuality. Maybe she will become hooked on squirting orgasms when her brother continually homes in on her G-spot
Epic
I love the way you put the story together and I hope you continue with another chapter or two. I've been going through all of your stories and you're a truly talented author.
HOT little fuckers!
Really love this and hoping for a chapter 3! I'm picturing him getting to fuck that ass of hers yet!
awesome
Great sexy writing Nikki. Anxiously waiting for more
Loved it
This was really good. I liked how despite things progressing quite far between them in the first part, they were always arrested by his plasters. That made the scene where she's stripping for him once his plasters were off all the more arousing.
A great favorite
I really like chapter one and chapter two. They're always a great read.
please write more i want to see what happens in the end with Bec and Matt it made me soo wet and now i got a new toy to play with thank you for the idea
just excellent. we need more!
I loved every bit of part 1 and part 2. Don't keep us waiting too long part 3! I hope that the hint at anal play is delivered on... (so hot!).
Bec's sexual awakening is really interesting. Unlike some other comments, I really like her adventures on the side and would be happy to see more.
Love it
Terrific story. It felt real to me.
PLEAse FINIsh....
LOved it!! Hope Thers MOre to CUm... lol
love good incest stories,,,
and this is definitely one of them!! more like this please!
To be continued...?
I HOPE! Maybe have the parents get home having had a sexual fiesta in Europe with several families including teens...wanting to figure out how to involve their children in their activities...also finding out that Bec has gotten pregnant by Matt...
HOLY SHIT!!!!
MORE PLEASE THAT WAS SO HOT !!!!!
That was fantastic. More please
Much much better than previous part :) It IS named Brother Sister, not Brother Sister And Anyone But The Dog. :)
kool
Well I liked it just would like to know what happens and if she will be with him and only him as a lover for life ... I mean write more ....its not over ...its never over
Fucking Yummie
Nikki ur so wicked, I luv all ur stories. This one is so HOT, please write more to this story.
Jesus Christ Nikki your an amazing writer
I severly hope you write more stories like this one your a fucking amazing writer
SISTERLUV
Fantastic!Very hot!Will she be pregnant?One more chapter plse plse!!
ohh crap
shit he went and did it, she just have to pray that she's not on her bad days
Want MORE
I love your stories and I want another chapter for this one. Does she get pregnant or not? the only bad thing I can say about it is that it isnt finished.
you should get the to foreplay at one point - since he was all tied up - its her turn to feel helpless :) think it would suit the story well
Love the story
What a great story! Thanks for the second chapter. I wondered what would happen when his casts were off and his hands were free. Thanks, too, for giving this young man some chest hair between his pecs!
Gross, why would he bother with that used rag?
Nikki, I really like your stories.
But let me make a few mild criticisms. Now, I am not being malicious but I want to mention a few things. First, if he had casts on both arms, how did he dry himself? And I don't think that you mentioned until late in the story that he has a hand free so I guess that is how he fed himself. I did NOT go back to the start to check if he had the hand free then, I am not trying to trap you, I just wanted to correct a few things. Now, his loving sister Bec is a fool, she was fucking Josh regularly then she fucked her brother then she fucked Mark, John and that bastard George. How in the hell could she trust each of them to pull out every time and to not come in her? Also, being a nurse, I will point out that you can get pregnant any time while being fucked bareback if you are not on the pill. Cum slips out all the time and most of it is potent. So, she was not using rubbers, was not on the pill. The pull-out method is responsible for more pregnancies than any other one except the making no attempt to prevent pregnancy at all (as she and Matt did on the last fuck). Now, I did not say all this to be a horse's ass although it may seem that way. I just know that you would wish to be as accurate as possible in your work. I really enjoy your stories and thank you for writing.
Matt/Bec
Please will there be a continuation of this story or are you going to leave us hanging in suspense for the rest of eternity?
I enjoy all of your stories even this one! You need to reread them a couple times you do end up mixing up the names at some points but its not big deal just an observation please keep writing!!!
Did she ever make a third chapter?
HAVE TO AGREE WITH BEFREETORUN
plus if he had casts on his hand and arm they wouls still need to be treated carefully after the casts came off other wise he could rebreak them EASILY. he would need physical therapyfor months and would need to becareful for several months after the casts came off. all in all a total fail especially since you FAILED to finish it.
Splitting hairs.
I've seen the comments asking about how Matt dried himself and the sensitivity of his hands immediately post taking off the cast. I submit that these complaints are a bit out of whack. Let's face it, it's a pornographic story about a brother and sister fucking each other silly. The whole premise is a bit out of whack. I'm willing to forgive a few medical and logistical discrepancies in order to better ger my wank on.
As for this volume, I would say that, on it's own, it would do precious little for my arousal. But combined with the previous chapter, it becomes a great epilogue to a hot story. It's almost like a special feature added to a hot porno DVD. It did a great job of ensuring that I would go to bed a ll hot and bothered tonight. I wish that I had rabidly horny sister like Bec.
fantasy
There is just enough reality in this fantasy to make it believable. However, having actually had my arms out of commission at the same time I do see some glareingly obvious problems here. Dressing and undressing, turning on and adjusting the water, drying himself, eating, and eating pussy while she is on her back. If he can't use his arms/hands she probably should be lying on her side or sitting on her face. Fucking is difficult in the missionary position or doggie style also. The best are the spooning position on their sides and him behind her, or Cowgirl where she has great control and penetration. Her bathing him in the shower is exactly right. My outpatient therapist used to come over wearing her bikini under her scrubs when it was my shower day. About all he can do for himself is watch TV. The sex in a situation like this is awesome. When medicare stopped paying for the therapist to visit, my mother had to help me shower. She felt bad that I couldn't masturbate. This was 30yrs ago and we are still showering together and keeping each other satisfied, plus we have three kids!
great read
wonderful story please add more soon
Good Stopping point
I hope he nocked her up a little romance would be great to maybe they become a couple.
brother and Sister...
Very good read...liked the story....
please continue this one, we need a conclusion !
Great continuation
Just need to reach its climax in part 3 !
Much better
This was by far a better chapter, no slutty whorish behaviour. now all you have to do is finish this story off with one final chapter. If the ending of the last chapter is anything to go by, I hope she does end up with a belly full of arms and legs and they realise just how much they do love each other..can't wait to see which way you go with this...the suspense is killing me..
Ended Much To Soon
This story shouldn't be over - finish about her become a mommy due to incest.
just getting really interesting
need to read more please, what happens now? Surely in these times she would be using birth control before getting sexually active.
More please. You can't leave us this close to cumming and just stop. A few more chapters like that one. All she needs is her loving brother.
As the realization took over her
Does she get pregnant by her brother? Did she want to get pregnant by him?
PLEASE write the next chapter - I'm dying to find out! :)
Oh, Yeah - I almost forgot, Great story!
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