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by Anonymous

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by Angeline01/01/08

I can imagine this scene

and there are some cute turns of phrase, but overall this seems to me like an erotic story forced into the look of a poem. Maybe it is a story asking to be fleshed out. :)

Your poem has been recommended today in the New Poem Review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read.

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by LeBroz01/02/08

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Okay, so a bit prosey, but it ought to be read by every unimaginative spouse to enlighten him to the possibilities inherent in helping her out {and up} while shopping at the local Victoria's Secret.

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