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The Legend of White Cloud

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by RhymeFairy01/05/08

*Naughty, naughty

Another cutsie one here. Love the *you can't see me behind this curtain* train of thought. Easy flowing read, filled with charm and sorcery ....

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by Anonymous11/11/08

very cute! I agree!

Willow is cute too! hehe

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