I hated to see it end, but I loved the way it ended. I'm looking forward to "Lost in the Wind."
I wish I could give you more than just a 5/5! I was so addicted to this story. I'm glad to see that my fears were for nothing and that they all worked out so nicely. What a beautiful story and you can be sure that I will be reading and commenting and voting on the prequel as well. I'm very excited to read it!!! Thank you for blessing your readers with your talent!
wonderfully written and amazing. Thank you for writing this story.
It contained elements that don't usualy interst me but the story was so beautiful thatI wanted to see the happy beggining of their new life.
I absolutely loved this story. I was hooked from Chapter 1, and could hardly wait to get back each night to see if the next Chapter was there. It was written perfectly, completely capturing you in the words ... I could see it all in my head as I read it. Beautiful story, very sad to see it end. Any plans on ever making another one to see what it's like when they are all together for awhile? I look forward to more of your stories! Very talented writer :)
i absolutely loved this story, right from the beginning. i can't wait to read more of your well thought out writing!
I read your entire story...
i have no idea how many times i laughed and cried... please tell me some day you will be published... how you create characters so beautifuly is beyond me.
a very rainy day (for the record ya'll)
reading this interesting series of cassy and nathan stories.
a few things were kinda "huh?" I thought only 2 babies bodies were found in the old house = one boy and one girl and then in another story it talks about 2 boys and 1 girl.
and once when Jesus is supposed to be running with cassy it says something about letting windy set the pace...
Other than those two very tiny things I found the whole thing so very perfectly put together it was plausible as most any literotica story I have read. You can almost really see or feel the stuff happening.
That so freakin awesome ! I almost had tears in my eyes at times. Aside from a few minor typos it was wonderful. Excellent story development as well as character development. Well done.
very touching in an odd sort of way....
I couldn't stop reading each chapter, I got so ingrossed with the people and love that came through like a rainbow of light.
I love your stories your a fantastic writer and the only thing that could make this better is if there was more
I was touched. It was a complete story and I still want more. GREAT JOB!
This story was an amazing gift to read and I thank you very much for the lovely present. Your writing is simply beautiful and the ending was perfectly written.
I see I have followed notmichelle through the entire story and I couldn't say it better. Definetley a great and beutiful story. Thank you.
Sorry I didn't comment or vote after reading the other chapters. I was so engrossed in the story I just wanted to move on to the next chapter. I've lurked and read on this site for many years and stumbled upon this story surfing tags. Few writers can hold my attention like you have with this story, Bravo!
I wish I could read years of this story. It's that good.All the interactions between all you're caritures.
loved the whole thing!!!!
I found this story and read it backwards/forwards. In other words, I managed to find the pieces in chronological order, instead of the order they were written in. Just an amazing, beautiful, moving story. I have to be anal enough to tell you that it desperately needs a good edit job, but the storyline just overpowers the annoyance of the awkward grammer. Great job, great read. Thank you.
I find BDSM very disturbing and I am somewhat homophobic, but I soldiered on until the love and beauty began to bloom (thank God!). You reduced this old man to tears by the time the beautiful ending arrived.
Yes! Love does conquer all (sometimes :) You tied it up in a pretty bow, and that made my work of getting through the first part of this all worth while. Thank you especially for the ending. I know it sounds dramatic (traumatic?) but I really did NOT like a lot of what was in the story. I have, however, been reading all of your submittals chronologically, and the quality of those which I read before this one made me know that something good, or at least better, was coming.
All in all I did have to work hard but the reward was/is worthwhile. Again, thanks. Lynn
This was one of the best stories i ever had the pleasure to read. I dont know whether you are already writing for a living, but if not you should definitely consider it. I would buy your books.
Well done! Very well done indeed!!
This final story in this series has the dubious distinction in my book as being the only story ever to get two stars from me. I liked the way you started this series as a psychological thriller but then it slowly deteriorated into a cheesy reverse harem type story. If you'd kept it going as a psychological erotic novel then it would have been so much better. I feel that in your desire to give it a "good ending" you've compromised on the overall innovativeness of the story line.
I will probably be massacred by people who like the typical happy cheesy end to novels but I really had to say this.
Also your grammar and punctuation could use an editor's hand. However, good job writing and I'm looking forward to reading your other pieces.
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