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by Anonymous

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by Joyce1906301/07/08

A bit different wrinkle to an old plot

Thanks

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by Erotonaut01/07/08

Take my wife - please!

Whichever way you play this, the narrator just enabled a work colleague to have non-consentual sex with his wife. Sure, you could argue that she gave in pretty damned easy and seemed happy enough afterwards, but it's still a mite odd that the guy was so eager to pimp out his wife to a co-worker, who's bound to spread the word around the office soon as the initial embarrassment wears off.

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by evk66601/07/08

missing dialogue

i liked your story, but it's missing more dialogue. i read some of your earlier works, so i know you can do it. otherwise, great story

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