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by LeBroz01/04/08

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What happened in that 4th line? I know — you can edit this, fix it, and later, when someone else reads this they'll wonder, what the hell is he talking about?

Other than that, I kept rereading this and all it conveyed was a feeling and I kept wondering what it was all about till I woke up and finally glanced at the title — duh! Especially after reading that last line and thinking of the title. Wonderfully done!

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by LeBroz01/04/08

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This poem was mentioned in Thursday's New Poems Reviews.


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