One of Those Days

hmm

maybe

Just for your education you shold know that

almost 100% of electrical suppliers are Public Utilities and NOT governments--They are threrfore owned bu little old ladies everywhere so I suggest that you yell at them--Other than the hate of doctors and government the story was not too bad ----but not too good either

Screw those guys...

I liked it. Clever, kind of witty and fun to read. You could have developed it a bit more, but a pretty good effort overall.

Well written.

Nice story, well written and enjoyable to read. I love the previous commenter who decided to give us a lecture on who owns the public utilities. Obviously the foremost issue on his/her mind regarding this story... Fucking idiot was wrong anyway. Hey fucko! It depends on which country you're living in. Ignorant shit. Anyhooo, nice story Moondrift, I'd like it to have been a little longer though. Cheers!

GOOD STUFF

Good stuff Moondrift,I am sorry Icant say more but I can hardly see to type for laughing at the utilities pratt

Good & Enjoyable

Ignore the prat and their lecture, they must live a very sad life, lol. This was a damned good story.

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While you're an amazing writer, it was hard to get past your superior knowledge of government, civil infrastructure, and medicine. Whether that's how you feel or whether it was part of the story, it definitely came off way too strong and was a deterrent. On top of that the tone was pretentious and (yes I'm about to say it) I wasn't able to get off on it (why else would I or anybody else be here). Hey, it's not for me, but enough people seemed to enjoy it.

5 weeks = 5 stars

you are an awesome writer .. carry on

thanks!

i think its very sad when you have to have sex with your own mother

in the heat of the moment

they found each other.....no need to buy batteries now except for a torch......like they say vice is nice but incest is best.....and a baby too...life just got a whole lot better for them both......

The moment of truth by Green Man

Well written and I enjoyed how you put the drama down on paper and not with long drawn out excuses to not enjoy the real thing. Keep writing such nice stories.