All Comments on 'Ivy's Aphrodisiac'

Good preview to your characters. Often, writers just jump into the sex without character development. I alm looking forward to how your story develops in future chapters.

good start although the changes in tense use were annoying.

good start although the changes in tense use were annoying.

but abit too detailed/proper ...

please add more soon this is a great start to what i'm sure will be an amazing story..

I really like the beginning here. Only thing I wish you do is describe Ivy and Niko a bit more physically.