Alien Impulses

GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:·)))

Great please write more is he supposed to go back to right the damage to earth or is he dreaming I HAVE TO KNOW
PLEASE PLEASE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Exc

I found the story exciting, and the story carried the tension well! I REALLY, REALLY hope you continued it!

Carry on please

Really enjoying the story. Please carry on

Welcome back Farmerboy!

Loved this story! I hope to finally see a sequel to your Island Chp.01 story. I have masturbated to that story countless times, and will masturbate to it many more times! Please, please write a sequel to that story! Just don't take two years to write it! In the sequel put that the 73 women Jacob gets pregnant only have girls, so eventually he ends up fucking them too (once they get old enough, of course)I am going to go jack-off right after I read Island Chp. 01.

You must continue...

Truly this story must be completed, it would be such a waste of penmanship if this story goes un finished, i so look forward to seeing the next set of chapters to this awesomely amazing tale...

domthesub@yahoo.ca

Excelent work !

Would there be a sequel ??? You have to !!!

Way to go!!!!

Wow man .This was really awesome stuff ,couldn't quite go to sleep till i finished reading it .Please tell me you have a sequel ......Please please

Ultimate pleasure

While I've only read 5 pages, there is something more than action and excitement. The intellectual aspects are above reproach. A must read for anyone that truly believes there is something else out there. Give it a chance, you'll be blown away!

GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!!

GREAT story, you are one of the best authors here, you have my brain in such mind blowing ways, that i wish i was this guy(i'm a girl), and i was in space seeing this as well, i really do believe that there is life on other planets, and not just our own, because if you think about it, why have all these planets and have ONLY one inhabited, this is just an amazing story, PLEASE, PLEASE, keep going with more chapters of this story, i want more to CUM!!!!!!!!

Simply great!

This story's got it all. I do hope to see an continuation - preferably on this site.

Absolutely Brilliant

Love this story. Hopefully you are writing more of it. Cant wait for any future installments.

OMFGITSAWESOMELYGOOD

DUDE IF YOU STOP THIS STORY I WILL KILL YOU
Its soo fucking awesome i am not kidding please... do not stop!!! for the love of god dont!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! ITS SO AWESOME!!

Please continue!!

Took a while to get into it but am really enjoying the story...please keep writing it!

Totaly Awesome!

Man, if you stop writing I'll die, I know it.
I've stayed up untill 4 in the morning reading your stories!
Alien Impulse is like, totally fucking awesome!
I was hookedfrom the first chapter; it's brilliant and soo immursive.
How do you do it?
Please, please, PLEASE, keep on writing!!

FANTASTIC

this was pro!
some little grammatical / spelling / etc errors but other than that, really VERY good.
could not stop reading.
definately hope there's a sequel!

Hooked (Line and Sinker)

Great storyline, love all the sex and building each chapter to the next. Looking forward to additional Chapters and wondering when all these women are going to be pregnant by our space/time traveler.

incredible

unbeleivable you should,and im serious publish this as a book. still can't beleive the lenght of this story...

Holy cow!

Ok... publication worthy material, but not done. I see 3 books so far:

1. The abduction and unexpected benefits
2. The time travel plan and execution
3. The salvation of the earth.

Close with things going our way for a change.

Great work.

pretty good stuff

i like it, although the threesome seemed a bit much to me,haha. also, i curious to see how the gemma situation plays out because somehow i see them having some kind of split and her telling people who and what he is.haha, lets face it, gemma is kinda a bitch. i dont think i like her.

Please contenue with this story

I have finished reading your story and fell in love with it and hope that you can finish it so that everyone and myself can know how it ends. Thank you for your time and hard work.

Unbelievably Awesome

Wow, simply wow!

I cannot stress enough how much I would like to read the conclusion of this story!

Keep up the good writing!

Please Continue!!!

Amazing Stuff

OMFGQGMTDSZDFB...

BEST NOVEL EVER! IF YOU DONT WRITE MORE, I WILL FIND OUT WHERE YOU LIVE, TRANSFER YOUR BRAIN ONTO A RED CUBE, KILL YOU, AND MAKE HAL WRITE THE REST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SBSP!

Loved the Space Based Solar Power.

cool

thiz zould b a movie!!!

Really great

but sadly unfinished. I would like to see himfinish his dream and also what happens withim and his two girls. Hopefully we'll have an update soon

Any more...?

Does the author have any plans to continue this story? I found it a thoroughly interesting and engaging read, and would love to read more.

Engaging

thoroughly engaging story...would love to see the finished product and what you have here expanded on even further...couldn't stop reading once i started...excellent stuff!!!

MOAR PLZ

Nice story, very engaging

Fantastic!

This story was incredibly well written, as it contained a good balance of sex and plot. This varies from the sci-fi norm of simply loads of aliens snagging each other (but come on, Megaslut raptors). Please try and finish this story!

really good

a thoroughly comprehensive sci-fic sex story.........well done....cudnt stop reading once i started.........i would request the author to plz complete it......its pretty amazing........

Fantastic!

This is undoubtably the best story I've read on this site, and one of the best I've EVER read (and I've read literally thousands of books).

Please, PLEASE, work on continuing this masterpiece. I'm dying to read more. ;-)

Regards,
a very anxious reader

Finish this please

This was one of the best stories i've read on this site and it is only half finished. I want to know what happens with him and hal and how the building of the airforce site continues.

Amazing

I'm a new reader to this sight and never thought to find something this well written and engaging. Please continue the story, I finished this first draft in a non-stop session of reading until completion. I couldn't put it down.

amazing!

This has got to be one of the most engaging stories I've read in awhile, can't wait for the rest of the story.

Specifically, I think you've achieved the right balance between vivid imagery and genuinely original and thoughtful narrative, while also striking the right balance of erotic and sci fi material.

Kudos to you and I certainly hope you manage publication at some point!

Unbelievable

Its Great!!! Dont you dare stop I couldn't put it down. Please please continue the story

Astounding

I've had so much fun the last couple of days (and late nights) reading this. You should really make this into a book and sell it - of course, you'd probably have to tone down the sexy parts, but I can't wait for the rest of the story.

Thanks for making the last few days very enjoyable!

Absolutely Amazing

Amazing.
There's no other word for this story.
Absolutely amazing.
I dearly hope that you'll continue this story.
It'll be too much a shame if you do not.
Simply amazing.
Please keep it up.

Really good continue

This is an amazing story. If this was a book i would really consider buying it hope you continue. If you do choose to continue writing i would be happy to come back and continue reading. Hope to see this compleated

For the love of God, please continue with this story. It is by far one of the best reads I have ever had.

Amazing. Finish This.

Finish it!

Oh my god, I about cried when I reached the end and found it unfinished. Finish it, sell it. But not before updating it here!

FOR EVERYONE!!!!

this is my first story from this cite and i am already loving it! i need more of it like asap x.x please! i think any others that have finished reading up till now will totally agree with me! FINISH THIS! FOR ALL THE READERS THAT DEPENDS ON THIS STORY EVERYNIGHT!

Please finish this!

This is perhaps one of the most well written and in depth stories I have read to date! Please finish it!! You should publish this.

Please continue the story

One of best stories I have read from this site. Very well written. Excellent plot and good character development. Thank you very much for sharing this story.

Very Respectfully,
ED

wow!!

this is a great story! you have to finish it!!! can't wait to find out what happens next.

Finish it plz

Pleasant Surprise

I really hadn't planned on reading the entire thing, but once I got started I just couldn't stop the story. Excellent!

More

You really must finish this story. Excellent personal story, great plot. MORE PLEASE!

Looking forward to more

I think this was the first story I've read here where I was actually more interested in the plot than the porn. Well written, with enough basis in real science so that it's not just another ridiculous alien boob story. I hope there's more on the way!