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Imaginative
Nicely written. Probably it would make for better sex if we could experience the actual feelings of the opposite sex. A longer story might have included the husband going off to the wife's job, getting hit on by all her fellow workers, and finding out that she is the office pincushion.
Brilliant
and original, I would love to this situation repeated and devolped over 24 hours or so!
I agree this was very nice, but should have gone on longer for each.
Not bad
Great premise, and a nice start, but WAY too short. Need to learn how to develop a story more and explore the possibilities more. Not just "Oh wow, that's hot, let's fuck."
Incredible Story
This story reminds me of the Star Trek series where theCapt.Kirk and a woman doctor had switched bodies your story was so well written i hope you continue to see how they get through the transformation or if they decide to change back he can go into the womens bathroom and see them and flirt with them as he is inside a womans body.lol
Pat
Nice one! Good follow-thru.
Nice plot and story line. I enjoyed it. Good to see us from our partner's perspective.
PW
Missed opportunity
This is an interesting theme - and for those who like their stories a bit more complicated go to Ann Douglas' "Through the Looking Glass Darkly"
It is longer and considerably darker, with a great twist at the end. It is the best body-switching story I've read EVER, ANYWHERE
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Who will you wake up tomorrow?
Body switching never turned me on but deserves thumbs up for originality (at least here).
lots of potential
develop it. what happens next? he goes to her work and the guys hit on her. normally, he'd be pissed but his new body likes it. he can't help it....the guy part of him likes the attention and wants to tease her coworkers.
Too Damn Short
I was just starting to feel aroused when... opps it finished. Please re-write it to include all new sexual situations for both!
Loved it wish it would happen to me
Enjoyed it
Thanks for the offering. Very unique.
very nice
Really enjoyed your story, a little anticlimactic but still very enjoyable
Very Hot!!
Wow! Very sexy!! Every married couples dream............very exciting fantasy!! Thx
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