very good story it could have used some background info and some follow up would be nice but other wise it was very good see if you can come up with a chapter two with the marriage in vegas and what happens afterwards
A bit improbable, but I enjoyed the hell out of it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
once again bassbelly leaves us hanging with an unfinished story. I wish the webmasters would delete all unfinished stories.
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very good
very good story it could have used some background info and some follow up would be nice but other wise it was very good see if you can come up with a chapter two with the marriage in vegas and what happens afterwards
A Fun Little Tale!
A bit improbable, but I enjoyed the hell out of it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
AGAIN!!!
once again bassbelly leaves us hanging with an unfinished story. I wish the webmasters would delete all unfinished stories.
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