All Comments on 'Best of Both Worlds Ch. 09'

Rambling thoughts: 1]. what a pathetic wimp, there are more fish in the sea - get on with it and find someone who actually understand the "fidelity" part of the marriage vows; 2] Cool - they are establishing a friendship for the child's benefit; 3]. once a cheater, always a cheater - run away as fast as you can and finally, 4]. reconcillation at any cost or time frame is a poor excuse for a story to end - it would have been better to end it at chapter 6.

Appreciate the author's efforts but this is like a drawn out spoap opera with no conclusive ending in sight. Bad news!

There are evidently a significant number of male

readers who must be bitter as the result of painful

divorces because the word "wimp" immediately appears if a

couple has any kind of reconciliation. This is

very well written and in some ways I will hate to

see it end.

No one knows for sure what they would do till the time comes and hopefully no one will have to find out.Really good writing in whole series,Thanks!

Gee I wonder what will happen in Next & Final Chapter?

we all know where this is going

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As I said in Chapter 8 Chooo Chooo... wooo whoo...!!! Now arriving on track 9 the Forced Reconciliation express train... making stops at wimpville ...loserland Nofuckingclueton.... and Mt wasteoftime.

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Two things really stand out

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FIRST Note how many times the husband says YET Still.... on the other hand.... But...

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SECOND <b> Lack of THINKING on the husbands part!!!</b>

now that the pain has dulled over the last few years husabnd is conflicted by his emotions between what she did and what they had. But now that the pain has faded <b>he SHOULD be thinking about what she did and what it means.</b>

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Instead by focusing Purely on emotions the author is setting up a reconciliation... which of course is utterly moronic and absurd.

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its been 3 years and she doesnt have a clue WHY she fucked the other guy so much and enjoyed it so often. THAT is the Key... Yet he cannot even think about it??

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She is still lying to herself in some way. As long as the husband does not THINK about why she still doesnt know the reason for such severe betrayal he is living is fantasy wimp land.

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<b>Her actions Meant something. what she thinks about Him as man a husband a lover and a father. The idea that this had nothing to do with him is a Lie since she doesnt know why she did it to begin with.</b>

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Unfortunately logic and reasoning has little to do with this story or author

why not tell her you can have a sexual relationship again without marriage ...fuck her ass every so often and show her that youre more of a man than jacques ever could be ...let her suck your shit stained cock t olet her show you shes sorry she fucked up... at least this way the daughter can see you can be together ...you dont need marriage ...just be fuck buddies ...its obvious he still wants to fuck her ...shoot just because she only wants him now well fuck her ass every now and then and give her what she wants ...and if you see another woman you want to try go ahead...but yes i feel they can be friends still daughter can see them together and think yes i still have both parents and yes they do share a bed at times ...i think over time she might even find she could use a dildo on her cunt as he fucks her ass and have contant orgasms, he actually may find he may even fuck her cunt occasionally ...id still ass fuck her every time ...as she said once he started why quit ...thats says she loved it ..actually her hubby should have taken it when he wanted it the first time ..then this wouldnt even be an issue ...another solution would be to never buy her lingerie again so she could show it to someone else again just make her go naked all the time ...have her body hair permanently removed and never worry about wheteher someone else asks her to shave ...shoot remove her head hair also and if she wants hair when she ges out let her wear a wig ...she might even discover she likes being bald ...this woman needs to grovel every day of her life just to get ass fucked by her ex for what she did to him...personal thought yes ...but if she really wants any relationship when with him she needs to just go out of her way to give him whatever he wants when he wants ...and i also think she needs to get jacques by hu=imself and ass f8ck him and take pictures ..just so he has a beautiful memory of her himself to hold on to ...maybe she should have his didk removed also just to show ex hubby that he no longer has the dick he fucked her with ...shoot stuff it and mount it on the wall as proof she made avery bad mistake ...ok story but just some ideas to maybe finish this sad saga ...remember hubby was the wronged party ok and his wife the slut

he made a step forward is about the worst to write. even after all this time he's still not over it. he should have taken professional help. this way he falls kind of back to where an abducted person starts loving the kidnapper, its called stockholm syndrome. That means instead of definitly condemn what she has done and make peace with the fact what happend. He starts loving the person who inflicted the biggest pain in he's life. Hey what happend to the other asshole anyway ? and who is she fucking now ? you can't tell me that a slut who is destroing a good marriage and a good healthy sex life go from 200 % to nill. so don't spoil the end. get him on with life but don't care to much for here.

A quick view of the usual complaints show one overriding thought. Because he didn't kill his wife and her lover, he is a wimp. IF you mental midgets don't like the story, write your own. Judging from your responses, I'ld say that you are all repressed woman-haters and one step away from being queer.

Who knows if they will get together...maybe they will maybe they won't. I'm just enjoying the ride.

Some of the criticisms noted are probably valid (rambling, drawn out too long, etc.) but I don't see anything wrong with a couple who both decide that it is in their best interests to reconcile their relationship. I think AP is painting a reasonably good picture of what it is like to have to deal with this situation.<p>Yes it hurts when you find out you've been cheated on, but I think the real questions are, 1) did the cheater learn from his/her mistakes? 2) are you better off with or without the other person? 3) did you restore balance to the relationship in some way? 4) how do the kids fit into the picture?

I should have, could have, subject myself to reading Hegel. Equally boring, but with Hegel readings, you could do some subtle name-dropping and, if done well enough, you could pretend to be rather "deep". <p>

But what was this anyway? Interactive audience-character-author group pseudo therapy?

The author has put in a tremendous amount of time and effort in producing a realistic portrayal of a marriage gone bad. Andrewpeters has devoted separate chapters to Sarah and to Bill which has allowed him to explore their individual thoughts and feelings as they work their way through the mess of a marriage and the carnage of a divorce. The story has been very interesting and very entertaining. My thanks to AP for his effort.

Ok, who's the mental midget, she still doesn't know why she did it...........get as far away from this self centered bitch as fast and as soon as possible. She can't stop the behavior if she doesn't know why she did it, it will probably happen again........and that isn't in anyone's best interest, not even this confused whore. Nobody said anything about killing her, just move on with his life and find a committed partner.

to the Naysayers. You have come much closer to reality than fiction in dealing with what was clearly a very committed relationship, and you have handled the "minefield" of exploration of feelings of the couple with great care and understanding. A couple of issues with your logic and definition of words will be explored privately, but I did want my approval of your story to show on this commentary page. Continue your story and end it as you see fit!!!

I like this series, I really do but this is driving me nuts. Where can I find Chapter 01...somebody tell me please before I...

Very detailed and thorough description of the emotions and situations a couple must endure when dealing with infidelity. I especially liked the defination of a wimp that Bill gave. It takes a strong person to overcome their trust issues and reconcile even after several years. AFRAID to take a chance because you might get hurt. That's the true definition of wimp. That includes all those that say that physical harm should come to Sarah or to reconcile is to be a wimp and any author that would write such trash. If you don't try to overcome those trust issues they'll be with you for the rest of your life. Even with a different partner. Very well written. Can't wait for the conclusion. Unlike some I realize it can still go either way. It's not easy. Really enjoyed it!

Maybe, but had it been me and that guy was in my bed with my wife I don't know. And yes, we need to share the kid and treat her as good as we can. But going back to someone that broke trust and love? Nah. Never, won't happen, life's to short for that... Cheers Yoron.

Is your male character mentally deficient? Because in order to take her back he has to be. At the very least there has to be common ground as to the damage of her cheating. And yet she can't be honest enough to tell him the reason she is a whore. So you as the author in another Loving Wives bullshit story have the male character again emasculate himself by taking back a woman who does not love him and will cheat again. After all she doesn't know why she cheated this time. I and your other readers know why, she is a common whore. When you write your last chapter read some books on human emotion and have the male character act like a man. Or just have him eat creampies from the get go.

Harry is 100% correct. There is way too much FEELING and not enough THINKING. The reconciliation COULD work if someone knew WHY she cheated all the time and WHY she would not and could not stop.

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I hate to say things like " Harry is right" since most of the time he acts like an asshole. When he isnt Harry's reviews are some of the best out there.

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Harry's point agrees with how this chapter starts out. The hsuband was in great deal of emotional pain and agony but now after 3+ years... the pain has gone away.

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So now would a good time for him to do a lot of thinking

about what her serial obessive cheating MEANT.

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Since the wife STILL after 3+ years does NOT know why she cheated and the husband does not know... ANY sort of reconciliation makes no sense.

or something else with a woman with so little feeling and emotions to have done what she did to me and my marriage. Goodness you look long and hard for ways to force the two back together. She is a slut, fuck her and go home. In reality, I find it difficult that he allowed the daughter to stay with her. She had a history, she fucked a man in her home, she carried on a full affair at the cost of her marriage and her family. Yes if she is involved in the life of a child you would communicate with her with regard to the child, nothing further needs to be done or said. After all if you fuck a whore and pay her, you dont go visit her in her home and enjoy conversations. This woman is a whore nothing more or less. Get over it!

Bill's problem is that he can't let go of the past. Why on earth can't he find another woman to love? Why are all of his sexual escapades just quickies, and then he breaks off the dating, realizing it could never go deeper because it was nothing like the loving relationship he formerly had with Sarah? I suspect it is because he still feels vulnerable to being hurt again, and he is unable to let his defenses down to love another woman the way he used to love Sarah. He has trust issues about women in general, and his psychological (subconscious) defenses are in place to protect him against another emotional trauma. So he does not wish to put himself in that position again, a position where he might get hurt again. This means he has not fully healed from his marital breakup. He says he still feels love for Sarah, but in reality he feels love for what Sarah was, his trusted partner, before she changed and betrayed him. The author can't provide an explanation as to why Sarah decided to cheat on her marriage. She hasn't a clue. This may come across as misogynous, but possibly the author is saying (from the name, I must assume the author is male) that he sometimes has trouble understanding women -- the eternal male dilemma. The old adage about women being more ruled by emotions and whimsy may be part of this. But then, why would a man cheat? The analysts always come up with explanations about the "little" head over-ruling the big one, uncontrollable sex drive, men are visually and sexually oriented and can more easily detach their emotions from the sex act, men are more risk-taking, it's their testosterone, whatever. But in reality, men (who often pride themselves on their logic and supposed control of emotions) are just as subject to emotional slights as are women. A man is pissed that his wife does not want sex as much as he does (and this seems like rejection of his expressions of love), so he attempts to regain control by going to another woman for the sex. Why else would Eliot Spitzer go for a hooker, when he has an obviously intelligent and attractive wife at his side? Male ego, rejection, many factors most likely at play here. I suspect Sarah (and women in general) can be subject to the same forces as men, but with different constraints and different modifiers. We can speculate that Sarah really, deep down (so to speak) wanted another child. Maybe she felt bored with her marital routine. Maybe she really wanted to try to feel young and desirable again. I just learned of a woman in her late 30's with a steady husband and growing children who was caught in a parking lot giving a blow job to a male with whom she worked; now how crazy is that? It's almost like she wanted to get caught. Maybe some women think so little of themselves they behave like sluts to prove that they really are pathetic and low, thus justifying their poor self-esteem. Many try to blame infidelity on the other partner -- hubby was not giving her enough attention, was not continuing to romance her, was not making her feel sufficiently loved, you know the drill. I guess all this shows is that I, too, don't understand women. My only criticism of this particular story is there was too much repetition. The typos and grammatical errors could have been caught by an editor, but as others have stated, this is amateur rather than professional writing so we don't expect perfection (but still, many authors wish to improve and want to know how, so it's not wrong to mention technical writing issues in these commentaries). I would like to see more from this author as I believe there is definite talent; furthermore, more stories provide more practice writing, more chances to improve, and more entertainment for the readers, a win-win scenario!

When are you going to finish the story. It's been a while and I would love to know what is going to happen. Will they or will they not reconcile?

Some people haven't experienced what others have and that makes it easy to condemn anyone that does something they haven't done yet. There is no doubt that a person that cheats is not indicating much love or respect for their spouse during that period of cheating. However, everyone of us has to acknowledge that after a year or more the intense romantic love we felt for each other at first lessens each year. We do tend to take our spouse's love for granted until it is threatened or gone. I think too that we all can acknowledge that the real threat to a marriage is the total lack of respect' shown to our loving spouse when we give that romantic sexual attention we owe to our spouse to another. That 'is not' a display of love and affection! There is no doubt that getting caught is a wake up call and brings back in full force what we are losing now that we are caught. Overcoming that total disrespect from someone you loved completely is the real hurdle. That they could still love each other is a no-brainer because they were attracted to each other from the beginning. That the cheating spouse acknowledges their disrespect and trys to atone for same is a quality generally unseen in most criminals and wrongdoers! Most of us that reconcile do so for our family, and if we can forgive the one who disrespected us so badly we can work towards a new beginning and a new relationship built on never again making the same selfish errors. I think that this is done more often than not in this country and there is nothing wrong in keeping the family together as a unit. I dare say that from our early days of youth, and when the rush of hormones first begins, we are all willing to be sluts as regards sex! There is not a man alive that would not like to screw additional attractive women. I also believe that most women dream of having sex with certain dreamboats in their fantasies! Certain types of men can seduce women and prey on them and we all know the type. Like the old sixties song,"If you don't want problems in your life, get yourself and ugly wife!" A beautiful woman is a always going to be a target for these players and most men 'are not' able to compete with them. We don't have the time or money, nor do we wish to do so. That why we get so outraged when one of them flirts with our women. The same goes for wives competing with young sexy women! So lighten up people, this has always occurred throughout history and it is why each culture devised some sort of ceremony of marriage to pledge the man and women to one another. The attraction to mate with other attractive humans is biological and goes back to the cave... Marriage vows are generally kept but will always be broken by a man or women somewhere in time. Whether it ends in divorce is an individual decison made by either spouse at any time. I have yet to see or hear of a spiritual being descending and annointing each marriage joined by mankind. Yet I constantly hear that to keep our children from being dysfunctional we should try to keep each family intact. So...if a cheating wife and husband can find their way to reconcile and be happy...what is the damn problem???? Once again, a great story author! Ron R Wood Roswell, NM

Writing vs. Plot

Too many people on this site score what they read based on whether or not they liked the story or its outcome. I am constantly amazed at this. I base my scores on whether the writer did a good job of organizing and writing a story. I wish I could be talented enough to write a good story. In this case the writer is terrific. There are quite a few good writers at Literotica and many, many bad ones. I now refuse to read some authors because they are so bad at either their organization or their pennmenship or grammer or spelling. All stories have something in them I don't like or outcomes I detest but if the writing is good I still give the author credit.

Mr. Andrew Peters you are a writer and I enjoyed this story. It was well thought out and superbly written. Thankyou.

This wimp out piece of crap has been headed south for the last 3 chapters, and it's not even especially well written. The moron stated he was a wimp if he did nothing. Like most moron's he doesn't seem to understand that he will become a wimp by taking the slut back.

I really hope that you upload the next chapter as soon as possible. I actually contemplated about bringing back Jacque to try and tempt Sarah again after the arts appreciation awards ceremony for either revenge or he actually missed fucking Sarah but after reading the rest, I thought not.

I hope that Bill and Sarah gets back together in the final chapter.

AP ... I believe you have written one of the better stories on Literotica that I have read ... Good Job! Having said that, I don't think I have ever been more disgusted with a "lead" character as I have been with Sarah. In a word, she is "vile". Her actions with her lover, her attempts to explain her adulterous actions, her total disregard for her family and the way she went about destroying everything she loved makes it impossible for the reader to understand or forgive her. I only wish she had been paid back in "spades" by not only her husband but her friends and family! Divorced, publicly humiliated, disowned not only by her husband but her daughter and then forced to watch her husband do what she did to him before he leaves her emotionally ruined .. that would be an appropriate ending! If you decide to continue this story, please consider a stronger punishment to this BITCH!

this well written story dragged out past it's tether to reality for the sake of continuation. No one drags out their "separation" that long.

she'll have a creampie waiting for him whenever he wants

as he watches his self-respect sluice down the drain.

Reading some of your and Sarah's critics I have a good idea. The local city counsel could make her wear a big scarlet A on her chest.

creampies - maybe she can serve some up for him again

Simple question... Whatever happened to Chapter 1?

I liked a lot of things about this story. Telling both characters' sides of the story is interesting and well handled. Bill's concern for his daughter is realistic.

Unlike some, I did not want to see Sarah suffer a violent end, but neither do I want to see Bill continue down the road to apparent reconciliation. It's a plot device that overturns everything you have done in the story. Yes, he might never be happy without Sarah, but it is also obvious that he can never be happy with her, either. That conflict is a difficult one, and writing about it could be a challenge, but it is ultimately the better choice for Bill and the braver choice for a writer.

Where is 1? Where is that final chapter. It is really good, but to leave your reader fans hanging is bad.

In case you didn't know, a homophone is a word which is mistakenly used because it sounds just like another word (to, two, too, for example).

Your story is absolutely loaded with them.

If you continue to publish - which I hope you do, because your work is enjoyable to read - I would highly recommend getting an editor to go over your work prior to posting it. That little extra attention can often be the difference between only "good" work and the truly outstanding prose which I think you may be capable of crafting.

And the last chapter please -

The use of a contextual editor would be invaluable - you write well but need help with the output - it may be a spell checker gone wild or you use of language but it will be oh so much easier to read and enjoy with just that little bit of help -

May authors seem to offer to do that for writers here you might see if any will do with you.

Thanks - let us see the next chapter Please -

This story is like KK's others; thoughts chopped into mincemeat by over analysis. Seems like KK leaves off writing then comes back and immediately dissects the previous idea over again. Makes maddening reading; as others have testified. Story makes little sense, after all the repeat thinking and lack of action on male's part.

Andrewpeters, like KK, chops up thought by overanalyzing, to detriment of the story.

... to think any man would take a wife ( Serial Whore in this case ) back after the way Jennifer betrayed him. Can the writers of these stories not resist the temptation to "mentally" castrate the male/husband characters?? A well told story but once again a story headed towards a Cuck/Wimp ending!

It has been a great read for me and I'm still expecting the promised Chapter 10. Thank you.

The husband in this story comes off as a weak pathetic wimp. I hate characters like this. Then the author just leaves it hanging with no real end to the story. I think he realized the whole story was a piece of shit. The husband can't seem to pull his head out of his ass. I couldn't feel anything for him or his slut ex wife. I agree with the poster who said he should fuck her like the whore she is when the mood struck him, refuse to to promise her anything and just make her part of his stable until he could find a woman in his life that was worth loving. I wasted alot of my time reading this crap.

Yep he is a wimp and a willing one at that.

She screws around for over a year and would have contined if she did not get caught. For her she claimed that it was about sex and good fucking.

He dated a few women and had sex but did not care about the fucking. She could do it for mere fucking but not him? Pathetic!

Perhaps they will get back together. If she had not been caught, the affair would have terminated within another year or two anyway.

and having shown its Hydra-Heads could he be blindfolded. TK U MLJ LV NV

She states over and over that she loved him. She didn't.

If a wife beater is asked if he loves his wife, he probably would say yes. That doesn't make it true. Love is one of those words that doesn't have a clear definition. Part of my definition is that you place the one you love in high regard and try very hard not to do things that would hurt that person. I think most people would agree.

She knew very well that what she was doing hurt her husband. She used the cheater's rationalization of "what he didn't know wouldn't hurt him" but that is crap. If you own a vacation house in the woods and a tree falls on it is the damage not real until you find out about it? Of course it is. The damage was done to her marriage from the moment she started connecting with her lover. At that point she put her love for her husband aside. She created all these rationalizations so she could live with herself. Right up to the close of the story she refuses to admit to herself that she was just a terrible person and she let go of the love that she once had. Of course she wants it back but sometimes if you don't take good care of the things you have they get broken, permanently.

The funny thing is that these ideas are clearly expressed in earlier chapters when he confronts her. He was correct when he first expressed them. She never fully accepted the reality of what she did and still doesn't. It's troubling that an author expresses an idea well and then ignores his own words of wisdom.

It is now about 4 years since you promised the last chapter. Are you still writing or not.

a cheater always a cheater.

Others note that often comments on a LW story are at least as entertaining as the work.

This is the case with J's words. A notice that less can be more.

I found this to be a mature and reasoned look at both perspectives that you have obviously spent a lot of time on, and yes as per other posts if you are still writing please supply your final chapter, so I would like to commend you on your efforts.

5* for the overall submission but as always this is just my humble opinion.

Could only give it a 1 star. The end would probably have fucked it all up with him taking back the dirt cheating cunt.

At the end the author made the husband out to be as confused about the importqnt issues at hand to the point of no decision, This was almost the rambling of a neurotic personality. For what good reason would he go back to his former wife after the protracted affair and all tthe lies and disrespect she heeped on her former husband /

It is almost impossible to believe that a married woman entered into a protracted affair with a gigilo type man and after the fact she can't answer the why question.

Cuck cuck cuck....Totally sucks.

It is funny to see comments by some who didn't seem to read the story, skimmed until they found something they didn't like. Oh we'll.

As I read this I found it to be one of the few stories where the wife truly understood, to a small degree, what she did. One of the few stories where I felt that she was sincerely repentant on the whole affair, not simply getting caught. Others writers have tried but this one, for me at any rate, was able to describe it in a way that was believable. I know this was probably headed for reconciliation and I'm sorry the author was not able to finish it for whatever reson there was. Regardless, the last chapter would have been simply an epilogue, both sides were explored and explained well enough.

yeah i read it chick flick drivel, waaa waaaa tears waaa im sorry, its okay im sure i deserved it for being male honey all is good and thanks for reopening my wounds.

Man never fought in his pathetic life i bet. chick flick drivel yawn

This is one of the better cheating bithc wife stories I have read. I am hoping there will be another episode, the final episode. It took the author 4 years to write these episodes, and now maybe he has healed enough to finish the story. Or maybe, after he took the bithc back, she took up with another man and destroyed him and the child in the process.

Didn't finish. He was on his way to making the husband a wimp. Sick.

Before this author makes a bigger mess out of this story. WAY too many chapters/words. And they should have tried some counseling rather than wallow around in the mess that was their lives. I feel sorry for the kid.

These lines of rationale have to be addressed. Plenty of well-adjusted adults come from single parent homes. Giving birth does not make a woman a good mother. As for Sarah, what values will she engender to her child as a woman who is selfish and deceitful. And the explanation that she does not know why she cheated, who could be comfortable with someone who does not know why they act as they do? You could never have any degree of certainty they won't fall under another "spell" at some future time! Cut your losses and move on.

It's too bad that you never finished this story. It was good writing and a great plot, that I didn't even mind the direction this story took. In contrast to many other readers who commented on this story, I don't think, that the husband is a wimp for considering to take her back. It's been a while since they divorced and they were after all childhood friends. He probably got a lot of satisfaction for causing Jacques so many problems: His professional life? Destroyed. His relationship with his fiance? Most likely destroyed. His other sluts? Gone, they won't want him again. This satisfaction and closure has no doubt helped in slowly mending the broken relationship between ex-husband and ex-wife. It doesn't matter if they'll get together or not in the, as of yet unwritten, future - the direction is no doubt very healthy.

I could see where it was going and it stunk. No basis except for your half-assed desire for any reconciliation.

Guess that last chapter ain't coming!

Good thing, too, I don't like how this is going, no way should there even be a remote possibility of taking her back.

I mentioned this in an earlier chapter, but he mentions the lack of an emotional connection with his various lovers. He doesn't give it a chance! You're not going to dhave an emotional connection after one or two fates.

At least he didn't do a complete emascuk thing yet.just well on the way.

A can see the BTB crowd would not like the direction this ending would have gone but you never finished the dam story. The question is why? You are a dame good writer and I see you updated your bio in 2013 so your still around but now this story is being finished by some one else. Pity to.

If it wasn't for the new chapter I wouldn't have read this. I'm actually glad I didn't but hope to see the right conclusion. Hope I'm not disappointed.

now it is time to see if FTDS can provide some resolution and add a conclusion to this mess.

http://www.literotica.com/s/best-of-both-worlds-ftds

here's hoping.

I think they could go back to a semblance of a friendship based relationship but a marriage type relationship would be a hollow shell of what it once was. Both needed to exorcise their personal demons and this author gave them a great start. But both also need to move forward with their personal lives and allow other outside influences guide them to separate futures.

thanks for the offering. Certainly within the realm of possibility given the time that has passed.

Congrats. This is a very good story. I gave Chapters 8 and 9 a five out of five. The first 6 chapters get fours. The obvious problem is the last chapter is missing. (And so is the first one, at least on this site. But we can infer what happened.) But I am going next to FTDS to see his ideas. But I wanted to make a couple of comments, even though this story is relatively old. While emotionally powerful and refreshingly honest, this story is hurt by the fact it is told as if recounting the facts to someone. We aren't experiencing the story, we are hearing about it after the fact. It is certainly a legitimate narrative form. But it distances the characters from the reader a bit. I love the important role the daughter plays in the story. But we don't hear anything else about Bill and Sarah's lives. Where do they work for example? What do their friends and family do while people they love are going through a break up? I would like to know. Also there are large blocks of dialogue - which is well written - that need more detail and colour of what people are seeing, hearing and wearing to help bring it to life. If this author had more stories on this site I would read them.

You are fortunate I gave you a 4. Usually, when another chapter is promised I look at the date of the last chapter published, then realize you have no intent to finish the story because it was published 5 or 8 or however many years ago that chapter was published. My daughter writes stories and brings each one of them to conclusion.

Sarah has continuously proclaimed to Bill that she never stopped loving him all through her love affair - I call bullshit on this. Sarah only thought about her lover for a year and still went back to him after Bill caught her. Sarah was so consumed with her lover that sex at home with Bill took a very back seat most nights. Sure she on occasion at the beginning of her affair showed interest in sex at home but, after long afternoons with her lover she would come home with that after sex glow and tell Bill that she was too tired that night many times over. She was so indulged in her love affair that she brought her lover home to ass fuck her in her husbands bed. So no, there was no continuing LOVE with Bill going on and it would have diminished further if she hadn't been caught and then found out that she was only one "time slot" in her lovers life. No I can't accept that Bill is mainly focused on scene in his bedroom with Sarah and her lover (as bad as that was) but the total year of abandonment that his wife did to their marriage. There should be no reconciliation in this marriage and Sarah can't be trusted in the future when she starts feeling old and not sexy anymore - she is just too selfish to be a wife.

and the friendship efforts died back in "08"

Don't bother with another chapter, you've already killed the story past redemption.1*

That bitch doesnt deserve a second chance..she needs to live with her choices ...dont spoil the it at tge end making him a cuck no matter what even after however long if a man accepts his cheating wife he is a CUCK dont let the him be a cuck .

THIS IS THE WORST CUCK/RAAC STORY "EVER" SUBMITTED TO CUCKOROTICA!

THE "ONE" POSITIVE .... THIS ASSHOLE, ANAL CREAMPIE EATING, PIECE OF SHIT WRITER HAS NOT SUBMITTED ANY MORE OF CUCKBOY STORIES!!!!

"FU" ANDY!

I loved him with my whole heart . Not remotely true if that was the case there would be no room for Jaques..

You can only fool yourself about that it isn't true in reality.

I don't know which stone these demented anti-cuck morons crawled out from under to spew their hatred for any writer who doesn't conform to their sick misogynistic agenda, but I do wish they'd insert their withered manhood back into the slime from which they emerged.

This is a well-written, intelligent story in which the betrayed husband puts his daughter's welfare before his macho pride and refuses to inflict hideous revenge on his wife (who has clearly been more selfish and stupid than evil and vindictive) and these sad excuses for men are calling for the writer's head on a stake. No wonder their wives left them..

God save us all from the wisdom of 'real men'.

LA

As of 23 April, 2018, it appears that those two are now the same. Whatever originally happened in what would appear to be the first Chapter 9.

The author had no compunction in taking down Chapter 1 after he posted it here, and now, chapter 1 is on storiesonline.net. There is a Chapter 9 there as well, but I'm not going to join there in order to read it.

Maybe someone who has an account there can read it and tell us what Chapter 9 there is about.

Chapter 1

For a long time, in fact for close to a year, I really thought I had the best of both worlds.

I'm married, and have been for 15 years to Bill. He is the most wonderful man and greatest husband I could ever have hoped for. I couldn't have asked for anyone better. There is no doubt that he worships me, and that he would do anything for me. And I have felt the same way about him.

I'd like to think that I'm attractive, after all what woman wouldn't. I'm five foot five, with medium length reddish hair, and green eyes, and quite slim. I'm not overly busty, but what I've got is all natural. Fortunately, after the birth of our daughter, I regained my figure, and a little more up top. Due to my hair colour, I tend to get freckles when I'm out in the sun, and always worried that they made me less attractive. From the time we met, Bill picked up on my concern and constantly teased me about the freckles, but in such a way that I had to laugh, and forget my fears.

Bill and I met when he moved into my neighbourhood when we were in grade three. While we were both part of the gang, the two of us quickly became best friends. Despite the fact that we always seemed to be together, the thought of dating each other never occurred to us. Instead, we dated other kids in high school, though we often would get together and discuss our dates, and it seemed, our frustrations with the dating game. Neither Bill nor I ever seemed to go out with anybody for a long period, and we would often moan about the fact that nothing developed into a serious relationship, while many of our friends seemed to have found 'the one'.

Two months before our junior prom, Bill's girlfriend of the moment broke up with him. Despite his looking around, it appeared he would be without a date for the big night. I commiserated with him, but was relieved to know that I would be going with Jamie, who was a dependable, 'nice' guy, but not the 'love of my life'. Then just two weeks before the prom, he broke up with me because I wouldn't put out. Now I didn't consider myself to be a prude, but I wasn't about to give it away unless I knew it was right. Sure, I'd done my share of heavy necking, letting Jamie and a few of my other dates caress my breasts, but only through my clothes. Jamie had even gotten further than most, as I'd let his hands under my shirt, but outside of my bra. One night, he kept trying to get his hand under my bra, and when he wouldn't quit, I'd slapped him. I guess in his mind, that was the last straw, and he started to look for someone else to pay attention to.

Soon after Jamie had delivered the news, I found myself crying on Bill's shoulder. As I poured out my tale of woe to him, he made the appropriate sounds, but then he shocked me, suggesting " hey, why don't we go together. That'll give Jamie something to think about, when he realizes what he's missing." I don't know why I'd never thought of it, maybe because he was my best friend and neither of us had wanted to risk that. But the more we talked about it, the better the idea sounded, and soon we were making plans.

Now I know that most of you are expecting to read about how magical prom night was, and how we made mad passionate love til daybreak, but that isn't how it ended up. Yes, the night was fantastic, and if Bill had pushed me, we may have made out, but both of us were still afraid of wrecking our friendship. We knew we needed to sort out some things before to much happened, so despite the feeling that grew throughout the night, we restricted ourselves to holding hands, with some pretty hot kissing when he took me home.

It took a while, but the passion built, while the friendship remained strong. Then one day we drove out to a nearby lake, for a party with some friends. We all had a lot of fun, fooling around in the lake, visiting, and doing some drinking. Bill was quite careful about not drinking too much, because he was driving and new that my parents wouldn't let me stay there that night. After a while we thought we'd sneak off on our own, and went for a short drive to a quiet, secluded area.

As we sat there kissing, Bill started to caress my breasts. The feeling this caused, along with our duelling tongues, caused me to moan with pleasure, and made me kiss him harder. Encouraged, Bill slid his hand under my tee-shirt, and started to play with my tits through my bra. I'm sure he could feel my nipples as they threatened to burst through the cups of the bra. Even though others had played with my breasts, the feelings had never been so intense.

I'm quite sure I shocked him when I reached down to grab the hem of my shirts, and yanked it over my head. The look on his face as he stared at me was priceless, making me glad I'd worn one of my sexier bras that day. "Go ahead" I told him as he reached behind me and fumbled with the clasp on my bra. Just when I thought I might have to help him out, he finally got it and pulled the straps away. As he leaned back in to kiss me, his hands roamed over my now bare breasts. I could feel the sparks fly in my stomach, and was sure that my rock hard nipples must be burning a hole in his hands.

Somehow we shifted our positions, and he ended up on top of me. I was sure that that erect cock I could feel pressing into me was going to burst out of his shorts and burrow its way between my thighs. Soon he lowered his mouth to my breast, and started to lick and suck the solid knob that was my nipple. As he did, I reached down and felt his manhood for the first time with my hand. He shifted to allow me better access, at the same time unsnapping my shorts, and sliding his hand over my bikini panties (remember this is about 20 years ago, well before thongs were invented). I couldn't believe how soaked my panties were. I immediately started to pull of his shorts and underwear, allowing me to look at his cock, which was far bigger than I had anticipated, even when I'd felt it against my legs as we'd necked before. At the same time, Bill was ridding me of my shorts and panties.

Soon we were both naked, with me stroking his erection, and his fingers gliding over my well lubricated pussy. I pulled him onto me, spreading my thighs, staring at the glistening purple head of his cock, wondering how it could ever fit inside me. As he slid into position, I felt it rub up and down my slit, then pushing its way inside, until the crown was up against that barrier. I gasped and he stopped, looking all concerned, but I told him to go ahead. He thrust hard and burst through my maidenhead, making me cry out. Just as quickly, I told him to keep going. Yes it hurt, a lot more than I expected, but as he started moving again, the pain turned to pleasure. Unfortunately it didn't last, as he came after about 4 or 5 strokes.

As he pulled out, I could tell he was upset because he'd cum so quickly, so I hugged him and told him how much I loved him, and how full he'd made me feel. Then I reached out and ran my hand over his penis, watching with wonder at how quickly it reacted. I really did stare at it as I ran my hand over it, after all this was the first hard cock I'd ever seen.

We started kissing again, and Bill was playing with my pussy, teasing my clit, even pushing a finger up inside. Meanwhile, I hadn't let go of his prick, running my hands up and down that hard shaft. Almost hesitantly Bill asked if I wanted to try again. This time when he slid his cock deep inside me, it felt wonderful. After a few tentative thrusts, I started to move my hips up to meet his down stroke. Quickly we matched our pace. As he fucked me, the feeling kept growing. I'd masturbated myself to orgasm a few times, but never had the build up been so intense. Suddenly I found myself cumming harder than I ever had before, and as I did, I could feel my pussy squeeze his cock. That must have done it for him, for he thrust hard and shot his spunk deep up inside me, groaning as he did.

While I think we knew it before, I know we both felt that night that we would be together forever.

Before long we were making up for lost time, our passion growing each time we were out together. It wasn't long before I gave him a first for both of us, a blowjob. I'd been playing with his cock, watching as a drop of liquid oozed out of the slit on top, when I decided I had to taste it. I stuck my tongue out and ran it up and down over the glans, getting bolder with each lick. Then I leaned over, opened my mouth wide and let it slide over the head. At first I only got a little bit inside, but as I started to move my mouth up and down, I gradually took more and more of it into my mouth. At the same time, I kept a hand wrapped around the base of his cock, sliding it up towards my mouth and then back down. I looked up at him and saw a look of pure pleasure on his face. If I'd wanted to stop, that look was enough to keep me going. Being the special guy he is, Bill warned me when he was about to cum, allowing me to pull my head away and watch as his sperm shoot into the air and fall on his stomach.

I found that I enjoyed sucking his cock, and it became a regular part of our fooling around. Eventually, after talking about it with some of my girl friends, I convinced myself to try swallowing it. When the first spurt hit the back of my throat, the volume caught me by surprise, but I kept swallowing until I'd gotten every last drop. To my surprise, and his delight, I found that I liked it.

As well, I got to enjoy the thrill of him eating my pussy, which thankfully he enjoyed doing as much as I enjoyed receiving. I had thought his fingers running over clit and sliding inside me was great, but it paled in comparison to the thrill I received from the orgasms produced by his talented tongue. The first time he sucked on my clit, I screamed in pleasure, a pleasure that only intensified as he pushed his tongue in as deep as he could get it, before coming back out and licking and sucking my clit until I almost suffocated him as I came.

Bill and I were an item from then on, and it was only a matter of time before we got married, which we did soon after we graduated from university. Our love was deep and strong, and we both knew in our hearts that we were meant for each other. As time went on, we were blessed with the birth of a daughter, who as I tell this story, is 7 years old. Our sex life remained great, though some of the mad passion ebbed as time went on, but neither of us ever felt we needed anything more than what we could give each other.

That is, until I met Jacques Hamel. It was about ten months ago. While we live in the suburbs, we both work downtown. One day I'd finished work early, and decided to go and check out a little shop a friend had told me about. It specialized in special glass ware, such as figurines and stained glass. Apparently the fellow who ran the shop was a glass blower, and made many of the items sold in the store. As I was looking about, he approached me to ask if there was anything special I was looking for. I was immediately taken by his voice, soft yet husky, and with a delicious French accent. For some reason, I could feel myself getting turned on as he talked to me. The fact that he would innocently bump into me, or touch my arm and back may have had something to do with it, as was the fact that he was very complimentary about my taste in items, and my appearance. I knew I shouldn't feel this way, but to an old married gal, it felt nice to have somebody who was at least ten years younger hitting on you, even if in a subtle way. In fact, if it hadn't been subtle, I probably would have been offended. As I finally broke away, and paid for my purchase, he told me to come back and see him again.

As I drove home, I felt quite strange. Never since that junior prom, had another man made me feel that way, and I wasn't quite sure what to make of it. There was no doubt in my mind, that nothing would happen, after all, I love Bill so much, and how could I risk what we had. But on the other hand, some innocent flirting couldn't hurt, after all it was good for my ego. That night, I showed Bill my purchase, and briefly mentioned the store keeper, and how exciting his voice and accent were, then laughing about it. Later that night, as we made love, I couldn't help but think what it might be like to hear Jacques whispering the terms of affection that were coming from Bill's mouth.

Over the next few weeks, Jacques kept popping into my thoughts, but just as quickly I would forget about him. Then I needed to get a birthday present for my best friend, Susan. After trying to think of what I might get her, I realized something from Jacques's shop would be perfect. I was quite sure he had forgotten me the moment I'd left the store, and was therefore quite surprised when he called out my name as I entered, "Sarah, I thought you weren't going to come back to see me, you must look at this, I made it for you." I was amazed as he brought out an exquisite figurine, and insisted that I take it, refusing to let me pay. "I won't take money, but come and join me for a coffee, I need a break and the pleasure of your company will be payment itself". With that he put the closed sign in the window and led me to the back. As we sat there, talking like old friends, I could feel myself reacting to his voice, and the gentle touches of his hands on my arms, shoulders or legs.

He must have noticed the effect he was having, for he suddenly leaned forward and kissed me. To this day I don't know why I didn't pull away and slap him, telling him I was a married woman who loved her husband, but I didn't. I leaned into him and melted as his lips touched mine. The intensity of the kiss grew, until suddenly I felt him unzip my dress. I let him pull it off my shoulders, until I was standing before him in my rather plain bra and panties. I know Bill was disappointed as I'd shifted to simple underwear instead of the sexy stuff I used to always wear, and that moment, I wished I'd followed his wishes.

I could feel my pussy gushing as he skilfully unhooked my bra, and sucked my nipple into his mouth. As he slid my panties off, I undid his trousers, pulling them down along with his boxers. His cock jumped up, searching for my touch. I couldn't help myself, and dropped to my knees to examine it close up. In reality, it wasn't any bigger than Bill's, though it was a little different. I leaned over and ran my tongue over the purple glans, licking the precum that was leaking out of the end, then taking it into my mouth. Bill had always told me what a good blow job I gave, and I put my best effort into devouring this gorgeous creature. As I sucked on it, I could hear him moaning, and whispering in that glorious voice and accent of his.

Soon, I could feel him tense, then shoot deeply into my mouth. As I swallowed, I realized that this was the only cock other than Bill's that I had tasted, and that the taste while similar, was different. Before I knew it, he pushed me back onto the couch, and his tongue was going up and down my slit, delving deep inside, and then back up to my clit. Suddenly, I felt a finger slide inside me, then one from the other hand. It pulled out, and I felt it rubbing against the tender bud of my anus, then push deep into that tender hole. I had never let Bill do this, telling him it was dirty and refusing him to touch me there. For some reason, it didn't feel dirty now, especially as he was bringing me over the edge. Just as I was coming down from that orgasm, I felt his cock push inside me, and it beginning to thrust deeply into my vagina. Just as he spilled his seed inside me, a second, albeit smaller orgasm broke over me.

After lying there for a while recovering, I suddenly realized what I had done, I had cheated on Bill! Jacques could tell I was upset, and tried to calm me down, telling me it was okay, that I had done nothing to be ashamed about. Despite this, I couldn't get the guilt out of my mind, as I dressed, telling him that I had to go home. He told me again that it was okay, and that he'd love to see again, and would be there if I wanted to see him, and how beautiful and special it had been.

As I drove home, I didn't know what to do. I loved Bill, and knew that I always would, and that he loved me. I wanted to confess, and throw myself on his mercy, but I was afraid to, afraid of how he would react. As I watched him help our daughter with her homework that night, I couldn't help but think of how I loved him, and vowed to myself that I would never do this again. Over the next few weeks, I tried to spoil him as much as I could, without being obvious. I made love to him almost nightly, and even thought about how I might encourage him to try and play with my ass again, though I didn't know how I could explain my change of feelings.

I still wanted to confess to him, to have him forgive me and tell me he still loved me, but I still was afraid of hurting him, and of his possible response. The way that he treated me, and looked at me convinced me that his love was as deep as ever, and thus, maybe I should keep quiet. After all, surely I would never be unfaithful to him again.

At least it's not a RAAC. Probably will be, but not yet.

"...But I did love you, only I forgot what love meant, taking you and your love for granted. Everything I did screamed that I didn't love you, or if I did, that my love wasn't that strong, that you were secondary to me. And anything I might say flies in the face of what I did. So I'll tell you that I always did love you, more than anything, as hard as that may be to believe, and leave it to you to accept that or not."

Why do female characters fail nearly every time to comprehend the truth of that old adage that males seem to grasp intrinsically? "Actions speak louder than words."

"But at the same time, I don't think I can say that I forgive you. To me, saying I forgive you would mean what you did was okay, and I don't think I could ever do that. And clearly, neither of us will ever forget it, as much as we might like to. So no, at least now, I can't give you that absolution."

Forgiveness isn't about being okay with what the offender has done but offering pardon for the hurt to the victim. Forgiveness is not absolution either. Absolution is not the wiping away of a sin but the removal of the stain of that sin on the "soul" of the perpetrator.

How do you have trust issues and fear with him, he didn’t cheat, she did. And yet you have issues with trusting him. Some more of AP blame it on the husband shit .

And no conclusion to the story. It's a shame. Maybe I'll continue writing it.

She was fully cognizant of what she was doing with the asshole so what's this about she doesn't know why she did it?! She did it- and continued doing it for over a year, because her itch was being scratched and she was getting immense pleasure while her lover scratched it! Utter nonsense that she still loved Bill even while she was being regularly fucked by her lover, whom she couldn't give up!! She even cut down the love making with Bill to almost zero. - Now that was really showing her love for him!!!!! How can Bill put aside the image of his wife being fucked up the ass and BEGGING her lover to go harder?! An RAAC would really suck.Don't like where this is going.

Thank God this shit tale was never finished, no loss and makes scoring even easier. Unfinished tales always get 1/5. In this case I am happy.

What an awful story about a cheating slut.

I see Mr Stevens no longer writes, thank God!!!!

I have no problem with this couple getting back together...She fucked another guy and he fucked a few women to...so it's more than even here...if they can make it back together...it's good for the 3 of them...and the only way to find out if it will ever work for you again...Is To Try...and I'm for that in this case......

The last chapter was never done

Unfinished story always gets 1/5

None of this matters…She says she loved him…he was the better lover ..blah blah blah! But she screwed him over and over again for sex with Jackass! ( how ever u pronounce it)…

All these guilt feelings …would she hve them if when she went to meet her lover after her husband left her…he had welcomed her and given her a good fucking? ( instead of finding him fucking another slut!)… So all her feelings of guilt have only come when she found out her dream lover was not hers exculusivley !!!

So hell no for a reconciliation!!!! The slut can go rot!

No woman or man if he truely loves someone will fuck them over in the manner Sarah did! Rest all this repentance is just a way in her mind to feel better!! Move on …find urself a woman who actually loves u..!

I knew this one is a willing cuck...when he stated that sex was good on his dates but felt no connection..i knew he wanted to get back to his slut.

of course it turned into another cuck RAAC story

Seems highly unlikely that their could be reconciliation here based on her year long affair with Jacques. I believe that after several years the wife is remorseful, apologetic, and realizes what she lost. But so what? After she went back that second time it was over. She should have known her husband well enough to confess the first time she had sex. I stead she went back and back repeatedly. Ignore the anal stuff. Take if at face value that Jacques just took it and the second time was when they were caught. She obviously had issues being a depressed sub. Unfortunately the way the author ended it, while at first appearing to leave it open, is in reality almost certainly going to end up with them back together in some form in last because of Jennifer but also because of they know each other too well. It would have been better for both parties to move on.

Thank God there was never another chapter and that you the author gave up writing this Cuck shit.

Scores 1/5 for one of the worst stories l’ve ever read here on Lit.

Reconciliation? After a year-long affair and no asking of forgiveness? I can imagine the betrayed spouse keeping connection over parenting issues but still "having feelings" for her? Or even considering getting back together? Better to move on, move away with the kid if the custody arrangements allow, and find a step-mom. Or even just do so locally. Recall the adage: 'the best revenge is living well'. Best way to remind her of what she lost for her infidelity. A close friend's spouse had a years-long office affair before it came out and he did just that. My wife and I were like family with them, and there were not winners in that divorce. Just one fulltime parent (husband) and one part-time parent (ex) who ended up alone after the lover left. Why a spouse who wants a new partner doesn't just say so and do an amicable divorce or give him or her a choice is beyond me? Especially with children.

I give up, I can't quite put a point to where I started to get bored

A shame it was never finished by the original author.

Just as well it wasn’t finished, it wasn’t very good anyway.

1/5 for being unfunished!!!!!!!!!!

sorry not worth finishing the story

One or two more chapters and he would realize that he too had the hots for the glass blower and it would be a whole new story.

This series is like a PBS pledge drive. It just goes on and on and on and on with no end in sight and nothing of substance on the way to that invisible end. Edit this thing down to 2, 3 parts at most. It's like cotton candy: 99.9% air.