Thank you for letting Amanda be with Marcus and ditching her sick ex-husband. I just hope she and Marcus are happy together yes I know this is a sex site but sometimes the people in the story are more important in this case Amanda, Who wisely or not did things that perhaps she shouldn't have done IF she didn't really want to which all the way through this story you kept coming back to the fact that Amanda did not really want to be a slut or at least that is the impression you gave me. Glad this story had a happy ending. Please bare in mind that the low scores were for the content only , you are a good writer I'm just one of the readers who is picky.
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Excellent story-please continue!!
Well done!
Thank you for letting Amanda be with Marcus and ditching her sick ex-husband. I just hope she and Marcus are happy together yes I know this is a sex site but sometimes the people in the story are more important in this case Amanda, Who wisely or not did things that perhaps she shouldn't have done IF she didn't really want to which all the way through this story you kept coming back to the fact that Amanda did not really want to be a slut or at least that is the impression you gave me. Glad this story had a happy ending. Please bare in mind that the low scores were for the content only , you are a good writer I'm just one of the readers who is picky.
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