there are some erotic thoughts but mostly just immature fantasies. A touch or realism would be nice. Cant really imagine a brother who is not mentally ill, pimping out his younger 19 year old virgin sister, just so his wife could have her black baby bastards father around. The hooker I can understand. The best way to describe his whole scene is mentally ill people conceiving more mentally ill children. Any wife that insisted the husband come along for her interracial breeding and then runs off and is mostly gone from him deserves the divorce that awaits the birth of an interracial bastard.
Winks was definitely woozy while writing this. Stay off the booze honey
by
Anonymous01/10/08
Now I get IT
What has coming from Europe got to do with this story?
by
Anonymous01/10/08
Pure horse shit
What a bunch of sick minded bastards.These two so called ladies are nothing but common sluts/whores who have no regards for their mates and their marriages are dead in the water.Kick the the sluts out.
by
Anonymous01/10/08
W.T.F.
You are one fucked up little person,who ever or what ever you are.P.S.Your boy has as much chance of getting elected as you do of writing a semi belivable erotic story,None,zero,zipp,nada,fucking never!
by
Anonymous01/10/08
Congradulations!!!!
You have single-handedly made sex to be more boring than watching paint dry. If I had to suffer through that drek any longer I was going to throw my computer off the freaking balcony. Stop writing. Not one sentence, not even a period.
by
Anonymous01/10/08
There's a real challenge
Obama babies are a dime a dozen in the hood. Why not take one of them instead of adding to the problem? And how is Barack's paternal breeder doing these days? Easier to breed em' than feed em'.
by
Anonymous01/11/08
White men are really, really weird
these last 2 or so decades. they produce most of the porn distributed around the world; they watched them all and they are bore with them.
now they start pimping out their white sisters, mothers, and wives! lol
the brothers don't even have to work or do jack these days, it seems. all they have to do is try to enlarge their dicks, use steroid, pump iron, and you have white hoes and their pimping white BMW-driving "big man" husband propositioning them left and right!
"take my wife, man.... look at her ass and look at that other white bitch you just fucked, man! you stupid or something? my wife's ass looks and feels firmer than that whore you've been fucking the last hour, while we was sittin' here in the trashy place of yours... Please, man, make my wife happy! Let her suck you and, please, give her a baby, man, my wife wants a chocolate-like baby, she said. She said if I don't allow her to have a chocolatte baby, she's gonna cut my little white dig off, or worse!
"please, brother, man, give me a break here, would you? Please, allow her to such you off, or somethin', please?"
really, white people are just getting to weir, both in fiction and in real life, for some of us here! LOL
by
Anonymous01/11/08
Geez wooz - Everybody thinks you suck - cocks r ?
To embarrass yourself as being so jaded to be addicted to helpless male humiliation - it & you are so disgustingly sick - why you must be beside your sick self with excitement - jacking off while typing, etc..
Someday when you grow up or rejoin the human race you may realize how much the chosen loss of self respect has cost you.
Till then get some help little sick one - soon.
by
Anonymous01/11/08
ONLY
Only in america could such a daft thing even be contemplated.Author think again before another attempt at erotic story writing.
by
Anonymous01/11/08
The Reason
The very fucking reason the Democrats are destroying America, even worse than the Republicans........what vile shit eating characters.
and what a great job at being a downer when the real Obama inspires every one!
by
Anonymous01/11/08
The result of bad education
Here is a typical result of the lack of proper education and nutrition - it leads to mental retardation
by
Anonymous01/11/08
Not bad
Not a bad effort for an ex patient of the local mental institution - the treatment didn’t work unfortunately
by
Anonymous01/11/08
Party at Rick's editors pick ?
Holy crap, I knew the editors on this site are shall we just say strange according to the number of gay and cuckold stories but to give boozywinks an editors pick for party at Ricks? At least it is nice to know that slightly deranged people can stil be employed
by
Anonymous01/11/08
Farce
A complete farce,I have my doubts who operate this site,I think it is Russian financed.I say that with good cause,let them deny it.
by
Anonymous01/14/08
fucking bad
This must rate as some of the worst crap on this site and oh brother, the quality here is the lowest of the low, so that in itself is quite an achievement.You have won the idiot of the year award for the worst writer currently on site
by
Anonymous01/14/08
POLITICS?
Erotica and politics never did work,sleaze and politics does.This is the later.
by
Anonymous03/19/08
The man said that they don't mix
but since you are the one who mixed then fuck you. First of all I have to say that you are a black person, or a nigger. Which ever way you lean. Barak Obama will never be president of the United States. If nothing else he will be shot. But lets go back to the real issue and that is that black niggers like yourself are spreading your shit all over the country and the ultra liberal shitasses ( they are not cocksuckers but yell that cocksuckers have rights...so big deal...But what you are doing is writing these really stupid stories about an ultra liberal white couple who want to have their Obama baby...go to Jamaca to fuck a nigger. They are that and not black people determined by their asshole superior attitude against whites. You make the white people that you want be anything that you want them to do and that is to be real big supporters of Barak Obama...The nigger is happy because he knows that a dumb white dufus will be taking care of his black baby after he got through ruining her for anything but ultra large cocks (whitch the majority of the black race doesn't have ) anything...about like the white man that the nigger superpremicist envisions all white people to be. So don't wave your little three inch cock at me mutherfucker..If white men are really that dumb and really want that then I will denounce them...NO Woozy widdle peepee....You black mutherfucker...you are wrong...and you will soon find out.
by
Anonymous03/19/08
Underage limits?
Aren't you supposed to be over i8 to publish any stories here? This reads like it was banged out by a spotty faced 13 year old typing with two finger. No wonder school results are so bad
by
Anonymous04/08/08
Your kidding me right?
First off sex and politics in a story sucks. Second, Obama is the last person we need as president, ever look up what he wants to do? I rather have the bitch Hilary than him.
by
Anonymous01/18/09
DUH
CRAP, CRAP,CRAP--A ten year chimp could writ a better story than this--
by
Anonymous01/18/09
DUH
CRAP, CRAP,CRAP--A ten year chimp could writ a better story than this--
I have finally read, well, skimmed really, a story that was so racist and bad, that not even the usually cuckold-loving, masochistic white guys gave it a good review. I hope this was written as a gag. (because I sure did!)
This should tell you something, writer. First, don't write about something you don't understand. Second, never, never, NEVER insert politics into a story. Osama Obama may be the president, but there are still a lot of hurting republicans out there who will love the chance to strike back at everyone who voted for the guy. I didn't, btw.
try something different the next time out - like a fairy tale.
English
Really a fantasy story here.
there are some erotic thoughts but mostly just immature fantasies. A touch or realism would be nice. Cant really imagine a brother who is not mentally ill, pimping out his younger 19 year old virgin sister, just so his wife could have her black baby bastards father around. The hooker I can understand. The best way to describe his whole scene is mentally ill people conceiving more mentally ill children. Any wife that insisted the husband come along for her interracial breeding and then runs off and is mostly gone from him deserves the divorce that awaits the birth of an interracial bastard.
Crappy Writing + Crappy Story Line = Crap
*
Another wimp story
POS story. Author must from Europe or a woman hating man.
True
Winks was definitely woozy while writing this. Stay off the booze honey
Now I get IT
What has coming from Europe got to do with this story?
Pure horse shit
What a bunch of sick minded bastards.These two so called ladies are nothing but common sluts/whores who have no regards for their mates and their marriages are dead in the water.Kick the the sluts out.
W.T.F.
You are one fucked up little person,who ever or what ever you are.P.S.Your boy has as much chance of getting elected as you do of writing a semi belivable erotic story,None,zero,zipp,nada,fucking never!
Congradulations!!!!
You have single-handedly made sex to be more boring than watching paint dry. If I had to suffer through that drek any longer I was going to throw my computer off the freaking balcony. Stop writing. Not one sentence, not even a period.
There's a real challenge
Obama babies are a dime a dozen in the hood. Why not take one of them instead of adding to the problem? And how is Barack's paternal breeder doing these days? Easier to breed em' than feed em'.
White men are really, really weird
these last 2 or so decades. they produce most of the porn distributed around the world; they watched them all and they are bore with them.
now they start pimping out their white sisters, mothers, and wives! lol
the brothers don't even have to work or do jack these days, it seems. all they have to do is try to enlarge their dicks, use steroid, pump iron, and you have white hoes and their pimping white BMW-driving "big man" husband propositioning them left and right!
"take my wife, man.... look at her ass and look at that other white bitch you just fucked, man! you stupid or something? my wife's ass looks and feels firmer than that whore you've been fucking the last hour, while we was sittin' here in the trashy place of yours... Please, man, make my wife happy! Let her suck you and, please, give her a baby, man, my wife wants a chocolate-like baby, she said. She said if I don't allow her to have a chocolatte baby, she's gonna cut my little white dig off, or worse!
"please, brother, man, give me a break here, would you? Please, allow her to such you off, or somethin', please?"
really, white people are just getting to weir, both in fiction and in real life, for some of us here! LOL
Geez wooz - Everybody thinks you suck - cocks r ?
To embarrass yourself as being so jaded to be addicted to helpless male humiliation - it & you are so disgustingly sick - why you must be beside your sick self with excitement - jacking off while typing, etc..
Someday when you grow up or rejoin the human race you may realize how much the chosen loss of self respect has cost you.
Till then get some help little sick one - soon.
ONLY
Only in america could such a daft thing even be contemplated.Author think again before another attempt at erotic story writing.
The Reason
The very fucking reason the Democrats are destroying America, even worse than the Republicans........what vile shit eating characters.
Boring and tasteless
and what a great job at being a downer when the real Obama inspires every one!
The result of bad education
Here is a typical result of the lack of proper education and nutrition - it leads to mental retardation
Not bad
Not a bad effort for an ex patient of the local mental institution - the treatment didn’t work unfortunately
Party at Rick's editors pick ?
Holy crap, I knew the editors on this site are shall we just say strange according to the number of gay and cuckold stories but to give boozywinks an editors pick for party at Ricks? At least it is nice to know that slightly deranged people can stil be employed
Farce
A complete farce,I have my doubts who operate this site,I think it is Russian financed.I say that with good cause,let them deny it.
fucking bad
This must rate as some of the worst crap on this site and oh brother, the quality here is the lowest of the low, so that in itself is quite an achievement.You have won the idiot of the year award for the worst writer currently on site
POLITICS?
Erotica and politics never did work,sleaze and politics does.This is the later.
The man said that they don't mix
but since you are the one who mixed then fuck you. First of all I have to say that you are a black person, or a nigger. Which ever way you lean. Barak Obama will never be president of the United States. If nothing else he will be shot. But lets go back to the real issue and that is that black niggers like yourself are spreading your shit all over the country and the ultra liberal shitasses ( they are not cocksuckers but yell that cocksuckers have rights...so big deal...But what you are doing is writing these really stupid stories about an ultra liberal white couple who want to have their Obama baby...go to Jamaca to fuck a nigger. They are that and not black people determined by their asshole superior attitude against whites. You make the white people that you want be anything that you want them to do and that is to be real big supporters of Barak Obama...The nigger is happy because he knows that a dumb white dufus will be taking care of his black baby after he got through ruining her for anything but ultra large cocks (whitch the majority of the black race doesn't have ) anything...about like the white man that the nigger superpremicist envisions all white people to be. So don't wave your little three inch cock at me mutherfucker..If white men are really that dumb and really want that then I will denounce them...NO Woozy widdle peepee....You black mutherfucker...you are wrong...and you will soon find out.
Underage limits?
Aren't you supposed to be over i8 to publish any stories here? This reads like it was banged out by a spotty faced 13 year old typing with two finger. No wonder school results are so bad
Your kidding me right?
First off sex and politics in a story sucks. Second, Obama is the last person we need as president, ever look up what he wants to do? I rather have the bitch Hilary than him.
DUH
CRAP, CRAP,CRAP--A ten year chimp could writ a better story than this--
DUH
CRAP, CRAP,CRAP--A ten year chimp could writ a better story than this--
Now I have seen everyting.....
I have finally read, well, skimmed really, a story that was so racist and bad, that not even the usually cuckold-loving, masochistic white guys gave it a good review. I hope this was written as a gag. (because I sure did!)
This should tell you something, writer. First, don't write about something you don't understand. Second, never, never, NEVER insert politics into a story. Osama Obama may be the president, but there are still a lot of hurting republicans out there who will love the chance to strike back at everyone who voted for the guy. I didn't, btw.
try something different the next time out - like a fairy tale.
Cheers
C
Super hot!
Definitely pushed all the right buttons for us fans of this genre. Good job!
How wrong you were.
To all the hate mongers who left comments about Obama, I guess you're eating you're words know.
To the author ignore all the negative comments. It seems that some people just read this kind of story just so they can bag it.
You Are Fucked Up
And write some seriously fucked up stories. I take it you couldn't have kid's. Thank God for that.
AIDS--STD
I hope you get liberal--socialist aid and die---HA HA HA --you know what that is you have your head up your ass
Put this nasty shit in IR!!!
Hey doumbass put this shit in IR!!!
total
Total fucking shit, stick it your fucking ass you nigger lover.
Could have been good.
Wasn't.
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