All Comments on '15 two, 15 four, then 69'

by bruce49

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice Story

Well told; just like I imagine I'll be writing someday ~ I hope a similar story. I like your honesty.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very nice

I get tired of so many stories where the girl "just turned 18" -- I enjoy sexy mature lovin' stories done right. And I love 69!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nice, but not erotic

Nice story, nice writing style, but it wasn't hot. It wasn't sexy. It wasn't erotic. Maybe Reader's Digest would be a better place for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Not Erotic?

How can anyone say that this tale is not erotic? I'm an octogenarian and it still got my dick up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Veryy tasteful

Very well told, grammar and sentence structure made it a very nice read.

This story closely parallels the relationship I currently have with a friend. I wish my experience with her will progress as far as in this story, or farther.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Old Age Fun

Fulfillment of a fantasy Bruce. Great story. Love my wife dearly, but have a couple of lady friends like Sue that I'd like to play cribbage with too for a weekend!! Great story - simple yet meaniingful ! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good Work if you ca get it

A fun weekend and cards.

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