All Comments on 'A Demon's Prize'

well done, looking forward to the next chapter

Great effort for your first time more please

I loved it, can't wait for the continuation and more stories.

this is a good story and a great first effort i really enjoyed not only the story but the idea as well. the only thing i would change is to make the language a little less proper so it flows a bit smoother

Great story I loved the added twist on the end ... can't wait to hear her side of things.

PLEASE continue this story.

Just the right touch of humour.

Ohmy!!!! very good story!!!

Loved this story and what an awesome ending! Rarely do I disagree with other readers, but I actually like the use of more 'proper' - 'formal' English on the part of the demon. Gives him an air of real sophistication. Really well done! Looking forward to more chapters! A very fun and enjoyable read!