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good
well done, looking forward to the next chapter
Well Done
Great effort for your first time more please
Very good
I loved it, can't wait for the continuation and more stories.
well done
this is a good story and a great first effort i really enjoyed not only the story but the idea as well. the only thing i would change is to make the language a little less proper so it flows a bit smoother
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!
Great story I loved the added twist on the end ... can't wait to hear her side of things.
Excellent Beginning.
PLEASE continue this story.
Just the right touch of humour.
ohhhhh
Ohmy!!!! very good story!!!
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