by Reindeer58
Really Good story and can't wait for the next Chapter.
Story has been building nicely, but this chapter should have better datailed Jack's latest intimacy with Janet.
Wonderful!
I wanked slowly through the build up of your chapters, finally exploding all over my desk!
When Sue gets back from Germany I will read it out loud to her and we will masturbate together
Thank you!
Tom
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i love this series. it is the greatest. i love all the stockings. the way you have written these stories is very great. teasing through the first few chapters was really great. it made the fact that they finally had sex in this one even better. please upload more of this series. i want to read more.
will there be any more of this story.it seem to have a lot more to go. thanks
I'm delighted that you are still working on the "<B>Any Chance We Could</B>" story (most recent post appeared today). However, I'm very disappointed that you seem to have quit on "<B>Summer at Home</B>" with it just off to a really good start.
<BR>It is a very good story, although it does suffer from a number of writing errors (awkward phrases, omitted words, words ending in 'ed' or 's' when they should not).
<BR>I hope you will come back to "<B>Summer at Home</B>" and finish it.
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<I>-- srgeek --</I>
Have just read this story, after finding a link with it in any chance we could. Would love to read all of it to find out how both stories are linked.
Hi I have enjoy te story would like to see the rest if you are still around.
This has been one of the best and most erotic stories that I have 'ever' read. Your dialoge and tempo were perfect. The plot had me hooked in the first chapter. I hope this summer really never ends. Thanks for sharing.
thanks a lot, can't wait for the next chapter, well written, one of the best story's that I read so far !!!!!!