All Comments on 'Summer at Home Ch. 05'

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Billydee2Billydee2over 16 years ago
Very Glad to See the Stpry Continued

Really Good story and can't wait for the next Chapter.

mBrowmBrowover 16 years ago
Elaborate?

Story has been building nicely, but this chapter should have better datailed Jack's latest intimacy with Janet.

Girls_cum_firstGirls_cum_firstabout 16 years ago
LONG SLOW SEX

Wonderful!

I wanked slowly through the build up of your chapters, finally exploding all over my desk!

When Sue gets back from Germany I will read it out loud to her and we will masturbate together

Thank you!

Tom

Girls_cum_first

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I wish I was Jack.

YES!! YES!! Bring on the peeing

kev_mo4989kev_mo4989about 15 years ago
WOW!!!!!!

i love this series. it is the greatest. i love all the stockings. the way you have written these stories is very great. teasing through the first few chapters was really great. it made the fact that they finally had sex in this one even better. please upload more of this series. i want to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more

will there be any more of this story.it seem to have a lot more to go. thanks

srgeeksrgeekover 14 years ago
What happened to chapter six and the others?

I'm delighted that you are still working on the "<B>Any Chance We Could</B>" story (most recent post appeared today). However, I'm very disappointed that you seem to have quit on "<B>Summer at Home</B>" with it just off to a really good start.

<BR>It is a very good story, although it does suffer from a number of writing errors (awkward phrases, omitted words, words ending in 'ed' or 's' when they should not).

<BR>I hope you will come back to "<B>Summer at Home</B>" and finish it.

<P>

<I>-- srgeek --</I>

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

How long till the next chapter

biggeoffbiggeoffabout 13 years ago
need more

Really Good story and can't wait for the next Chapter need more

emm353emm353about 13 years ago
need the rest

Have just read this story, after finding a link with it in any chance we could. Would love to read all of it to find out how both stories are linked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Like to see more....

Hi I have enjoy te story would like to see the rest if you are still around.

TimmysFriendTimmysFriendover 11 years ago
More Please...

This has been one of the best and most erotic stories that I have 'ever' read. Your dialoge and tempo were perfect. The plot had me hooked in the first chapter. I hope this summer really never ends. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
one of the best story's

thanks a lot, can't wait for the next chapter, well written, one of the best story's that I read so far !!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved the story

I loved the story. But is there gonna be another chapter

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Chapter 48 submitted 8/16

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