by AMY_Monaco
I find myself wondering just as Alex, but I wonder what the next chapter will bring. I expect it will bring Alex his comeuppance. I think that Emma will lead him on a fine chase. And where the devil would she have learned how to...well you know...she's suppose to be innocent.
And how furious will Jason be when he finally learns about Jullian. If Penny thought her bottom was sore before, I bet she's in for an even bigger suprise.
Seriously, this story is beyond good. You have let us enter into this marvelous time with people who are interesting and passionate and very sexy.
As I said at the beginning, I am so looking forward to the next and the next and the next...
I think you have more of a knack for these kind of stories than for the others, this was very well done and beautifully written with only a few rough spots. Keep it up!
Oh, Jason is challenging Cupid by saying that he won't fall in love with anyone. How ironic it would be if he found himself in love with his fiancé. I sort of feel bad for Penny being caught between two men. I also love the flirting between Alex and Emma. It seems she has found her way into the playboy's heart. Thanks so much for writing!
Jason may seem a little rough even brusque at times but I really like him and I hope Penny gives him a chance! This is a great story!
Okay - you've now indicated time period, by mentioning Pride and Prejudice. Don't try to writer period pieces without doing the necessary research - the relationships in this story are just wrong for the social class and background you're trying to portray. Hideous.