All Comments on 'Computer Stripper'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Keep this going

Please keep this going ,she had the right tutors there are some red hot fiery women in central europe,believe you me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thats It???

Um, is this supposed to be chapter 1 or something, cause its extremely weak on its own. I'd say far too short for even a single chapter, but I hardly think this even covered a chapter worth of material.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
NEEDS COMPLEATED

SO FAR SO GOOD,HOWEVER IT SEEMS UNFINISHED.PLEASE ADD TO IT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
wtf

no incest no taboo so why is it in this area and it is so short why did you even bother to write it total waste of time

PlacidoSwannPlacidoSwannabout 14 years ago
Not a bad start

But you should get to the good stuff soonish.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Nice.

I do hope there will be more to this story.

Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 13 years ago
Nice.

I do hope there will be more to this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Good story so far just one thing to say....More Please!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Weak

Little point to posting this on Literotica since it could on any public bulletin board.

Rapier875Rapier875about 5 years ago
So where the hell is part 2 ?

So many unfinished stories on here...........

fifarafa15fifarafa15almost 4 years ago
missing something..

It should be as non erotic story... Or it needs 2nd part where he fuck her...

Rapier875Rapier875almost 4 years ago
Too short !

Far too many of your stories just get started - and then stop dead.

I'm not sure why you do this, but it's become too frustrating so I'm giving up reading any more. A shame as the story lines are good, but then you just waste them !

Rapier

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

What a joke. He's her brother, and she was stripping online. It's his duty to beat her to a pulp with a baseball bat and leave her outside a veterinarian clinic, with photos of her shame superglued to her naked body. That's the only way these whores will learn.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great start just ended as if more should follow

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