Amanda Teasing Two Ch. 11

All over the place

This series has been all over the place,I still find it hard to make any sense of it at times.You are a talented writer and you did persevere.I will look out for your future stories .

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Answers on a post card if anyone understands this story. Good writing pity about the content.

I'm a bit miffed at this series
I first read 10.55 which I highly recommend
but this one seems to have been headed in different directions at each chapter
The final discovery that all of that wasn't real (e.g. a story in the story)
is a bit of a shame, although some elements are still true apparently so the reader is a bit left in the dark about that.
Also what the main character (amanda) went through was real hard
in my opinion she was raped several times, although she did consent on it
so yeah it was just a story inside the story but still it feels like she should have come out on top at some point and not just this ^^

also the real incest is in this chapter only and it is a bit weird :p
still a good writing style though.