All Comments on 'Just Rewards'

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesabout 16 years ago
JUST

leaving my thoughts.

The fact that you could just create

a whole universe around "just",

is just rewarding in itself...

sGp

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
How Just you are in your love!

Ok I know you meant it differently, but I could not resist. I liked the poem very much. The tone hovers somewhere between playful and serious and staying in this realm is very erotic in and of itself. A second plus for me is the metaphysical trait which I always crave - namely the tendency the poetic effort which gloriously fail to define matters of the heart in 'cool' scientific manner. You know as the reader knows that this is just a device, but every one should enjoy this rich tradition.

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