by darkitude
leaving my thoughts.
The fact that you could just create
a whole universe around "just",
is just rewarding in itself...
sGp
Ok I know you meant it differently, but I could not resist. I liked the poem very much. The tone hovers somewhere between playful and serious and staying in this realm is very erotic in and of itself. A second plus for me is the metaphysical trait which I always crave - namely the tendency the poetic effort which gloriously fail to define matters of the heart in 'cool' scientific manner. You know as the reader knows that this is just a device, but every one should enjoy this rich tradition.