Universal Remote

Great Beginning

While your science basis was lacking, a little more fabricated mumbo-jumbo wouldn't be so bad, and it has a great beginning, but a continuation of the story would be great. I'd say since you are just beginning to enter the "Mind Control" section, spend a good portion of your time on your beginning and on the plot, and it should flow from there. Great Mind Control stories are few and far between, and if you continue with other stories as good as this one has begun, you've got a hell of a future ahead of you.

Not too bad for a start

I lke the fact that their personalities were not changed...they were simply eager for some action. Nice! As the previous poster stated, a little more scientific mumbo jumbo and some viagra and you have yourself a winner!

This was Interesting

I'd like to see this story expanded.

HUH?

"As I began mentally selling my billions, though, I realized that the FDA would never allow this product to be sold, and that most likely I'd have to do testing on my own."

What the hell would the FDA have to do with it? This is a piece of machinery. They would have NO say about it whatsoever.

erm..

er, because the FDA is responsible for approving medical devices? And devices that emit radiation?

Good story - would like to see more!

GIVE THE GUY A BREAK!!!!!!!!

The guy said from the jump he did not know much about the subject. Obviously this is a fantasy of his and he wanted to share it with Literotica readers. And his observation was right in the fact that maybe not the FDA but another government acronym would put a stop to what he was doing and when you think of the kind of work the guy was in, it only made sense for him to naturally assume that any testing that would invovle humans would be controlled by the FDA. Also i think he is right because the FDA controls any substance that involves a chemical reaction. If you affect the brain in anyway especially with radiation it causes a CHEMICAL reaction which would fall under FDA supervision. GREAT STORY

Nice! Curious to see what he does with it.

please make another one

I really enjoyed reading this please write another.