All Comments on 'The Obedient Secretary'

Way of writing.

Felt a little stage managed at times and lacked a little flow but on the whole was a good read.

Could do with a bit more build up as to the reasons behind her obediance and also why a new client would be allowed to see this side of the office.

In summary I liked it!

I liked the all dialogue style. I know how difficult that can be. My Obedient Secretary series must be added to as soon as possible. Excellent writing.

My wife is a secretary, I love the thought of her being used and abused as in the story.