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The Obedient Secretary

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by cbr1000rr01/15/08

Interesting....

Way of writing.
Felt a little stage managed at times and lacked a little flow but on the whole was a good read.
Could do with a bit more build up as to the reasons behind her obediance and also why a new client would be allowed to see this side of the office.
In summary I liked it!

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by harrylime201206/06/12

Obedient Secretaries are the very best.

I liked the all dialogue style. I know how difficult that can be. My Obedient Secretary series must be added to as soon as possible. Excellent writing.

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