Not a bad short story, short and sweet, if you like that kind of thing and I do. SO why does Anonymous (USA) (is that a surprise??) feel the need to be rude? It's one of the problems isnt it - people who leave feedback are sometimes less than polite!!
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Anonymous08/31/08
Your original story?
Why not post your original Business Conference story on this site as well.
I have a vague recollection of what I think was your original story but I thought it was on this site.
English
Whiff of reality
Definitely passes the "sniff test" on dialogue and chain of events. Well written and real-world dialogue, and great stroke stuff to boot.
Kudos!
Why, oh why, are people so rude?
Not a bad short story, short and sweet, if you like that kind of thing and I do. SO why does Anonymous (USA) (is that a surprise??) feel the need to be rude? It's one of the problems isnt it - people who leave feedback are sometimes less than polite!!
M
Your original story?
Why not post your original Business Conference story on this site as well.
I have a vague recollection of what I think was your original story but I thought it was on this site.
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