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I LOVE IT!!!!
oh I know if you keep this one up leader of the pack gets set back but please please please you must write more of this story no matter where it goes it will be wonderful because you wrote it..it's another great story ..
Do friends get to vote?
I want another chapter of Mira. I'd love to see what you can do with this storyline and your imaginative mind. Do it, you know you want to...
Time Share!
I love both stories. Why not rotate? Mira tonight, Leader of the Pack the next time, and then Mira after that...so on... It's a compromise. ^_^
Love it!
Love it! Do i have to choose? because i cant! There both really good stories and i wanna read them both! Has long as you finish leader of the pack eventually and dont leave it hanging like most writer's on here do! Im all for with the next chapter of mira! Cant wait! Thanks for writing
I have to choose?
I love both stories. I agree with the other reviewer. Mira today, Leader of the Pack the next.
But seriously, you have just got to go on with Mira.
Tricia
LOVED IT!
My vote is definitely with Mira! I loved Leader...but this story has caught my immediate attention and wont let go :-D
I'll choose - but I retain the right to ...
change my mind! For now, I choose Mira. I'm fascinated by this story. Wonderful update! And of course, I want to know about Elizabeth - was she the one who lasted ten years?
Gross as it was, the scene of Mira waking after he first fed from her was perfect in its realism. We the reader know he overfed and that if he is more careful next time, Mira probably won't suffer extremely. But she doesn't - so it will be interesting to see how willingly she returns to his bed again.
Wheee!!!
As much as I like werewolves, I love vampires more!! Please write another chapter of Mira!! *gets on her knees and begs* Pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseee!!!
Delightful!
Please keep writing this great story! Leader of the Pack is good, but Mira is like the icing on a cake!
great story
this is a wonderful story. I would like to suggest that if you have the time to spare, why not take the time to follow up on both stories. You have done a marveleous job of writing these two stories, it would be great to see where they lead to. keep up the great work.
Choices choices
I really like both stories and are glad you have decided to give Mira and Rillan life. HOWEVER did someone around here not say something about having a thesis to finish Dont make me send granny ower there.
dont stop
I love this story. I love Leader of the pack too but this one is amazing. Please dont stop writing more chapters for this story.
Continue Please
As much as I loved Leader of the Pack, I think its time to see whatelse is running around in that head of yours. I choose this story over any of the continuing stories with the Pack (eventually would like more).
I am really digging the conflict that you have Rillan experiencing. I can feel his love for Elizabeth from that last monologue. As for Mira, I like how you wrote in the begining that she was average, but have shown that she is something special.
Please keep writing (when you have a moment)Do you really need to sleep? And as for the Poll....my vote is more Mira
Oooh soo hard...
I think ill choose for Mira for this one, but id love to see another Leader of the Pack after that. Keep up the good work. I couldnt resist and pressed the button.
i am in love
with this one!
oh WOW, makes me wanna check this every day for a new posting - keep em coming secretme. This is going to be great....
you going to be the next one publishing?
Marinetown, USA
love it.
I like Leader of the Pack but I love this more. It's sort of a vampiric/druidic take on Beauty and the Beast. You've crafted two very fabulous characters and a great plot- I cannot wait for more. Update soon please and thank you for writing!
It needs to be finished
This story is just getting better. Leader of the pack is at a nice resting point. Please finish this one and then go back to the pack. Thanks for letting us in on these wonderful stories!
Continue
Wow. That was a great chapter. You must continue this story. I enjoy reading all your stories, but I have to say I really love this one. I look forward to the next chapter, and to see where this is going.
THIS ONE PLEASE!
what are you, nuts? MIRA please finish MIRA.
Leader of the Pack was great - but that one was quite long to read and so full of details, and as much as I'd like to find out what's happening next, I feel a need for a change.
This one is really exciting and I can feel the emotions of the characters more than I did in the Leader of the Pack - so please do this one first. And besides - everyone else wants this one too! tee hee2C
Thats it!
I don´t leave public notes like this!
My english spelling is not that good.
But I LOVE both this story and Leader of the pack. But your Leader-story is nearing its end. And this is only beginning!
Please write more of this and then swich to your other story.
We still love your work. Nomater what you ar working on!
I really hope someone understands this!
Total Suprise
After reading Mira I didnt expect another chapter for quite a while. This chapter was great, really added to the story. I find myself wanting to know what happens with them. Dont get me wrong Leader of the Pack was great, but a little break from it while working on this may be a good thing.
Well.......
you have us....hook, line, and sinker. While "Leader of the Pack" is wonderful & I hope you will continue it soon......We need to hear more about Mira & Rillan!!!!
Please Please keep going with it :)))
Choose?!
Are you nuts?! lol
How do you expect us to choose? I certainly can't. I love Mira and Leader of the Pack. I am dieing to know what happens next to Mira. But also i cant help but think about Aishlinn and Cullen, and the wittens :) hehe.
Well either way, both stories are great. If one has to wait for a bit before you get to it, than so be it, but eventually you will get to it, and it will be complete.
I'm Greedy! I want them both!
I disagree with a previous poster...while Leader is long & Detailed(I love that BTW) it's awesome! I think there is life still in Leader; maybe in the form of book 2 but life still...Mira, I just want more and more...well thought plot so far it has everthing going for it...Fab Secret, just FAB!
OOOHHHHH
I hate you so much for doing that!! How can you make us choose between the stories?!?! But if I had to chose, I think I would want you to continue this one, it's fresh, it's new, it's GREAT!!!
but...but...
ughhh i guess i can submit myself to waiting for the next chapter.
and by the way... you're already on my favorites list ;-).
Mira
Mira is now in progress. It needs to be finished.
Ahhhh...but we can't choose. It's up to your Muse
If there's a story in you, it will want out. You'll write it becasue your Muse compels you. I would love to read more from Leader, as you laid such a fantastic foundation. This story is strong though. It's fresh and UNIQUE. Even your writing style is different. It is far more sensuous and immediate. Your treatment of her illness, was real and compelling, not glossy. There's no 'fluff' here and I like it.
which ever you decide...well done.
I Want Them Both!!!
I just can't choose because I want them both. Please... I was there every step of the way with Leader of the Pack and really need another fix soon. However, you had me completely enchanted with this story from the beginning.
Please spare us your loyal fans. Have mercy on us and post both; and please do it soon :)
More More
I Love both stories and have enjoyed you real and sensual writing style. Oh. I realy need spell check. Anyway I think Leader of the Pack is at a wonderful Pause and would like to see where this goes. I would be Sad if you do not continue with Both. If you ever Publish I would buy both stories. You have a wonderful tone in both. Please follow this for a few chapters first and then maybe switch back and forth or publish and I will wait for the book. Thank you again for both stories.
hmm
I think the wittens can wait a little while.... I like stories like this just as much; kinda reminds me of my life...uncanny really..
More Mira!!!!
Love it!!!
love it!
I think I could tolerate time from Leader of the Pack if you're posting chapters for this too ;)
Interesting
This is good too. I am dying for more Leader of the Pack, I need to hear and read about Cullen and Aislinn. Oh please.
Thanks.
Mean woman!!
Don't make us choose! Both stories are fantastic, and I don't even like vamp stories. lol
Yeah!
Thank you so much for continuing this story I absolutly love it! Please, please continue.
Fantastic!
Thanks for continuing this interesting and unique story! If I had to choose, I'd pick this storyline. Can't wait to find out more about these characters. Keep up the great work!
AMAZING!!!
You have to continue this... Leader of the pack can wait a bit ... PLEASE CONTINUE.... you have so much talent I hope you do well in getting something published!!
This one hands down
I like this story loads, carry it on. Leader of the Pack is excellent, but after so much of it, one loses the fresh feel. If we took a break from it and were swept away by this one, then went back to Leader of the Pack, we would be flooded by affection for it anew. Please continue this story.
I choose
Mira. Like someone who said before me Leader of the pack was awesome, but its nice to have a break. that doesnt mean I wont love and enjoy when more leader of the pack comes out but I LOVE LOVE LOVE vampire stories:) So please keep going with this one:)
Loved it
This story is really good... can only hope that you will finish it and not leave us hanging!!!
hurry up
hurry up with the next chapter or else i swear i am gonna get withdrawal symptoms grrrrrr....lol
please please please ;)
More
I need more of this story!
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Allright, I got hooked on Leader of the Pack...then started checking out the rest of your writings. All I can say is WOW! I truly love the characters and the story development...and I'm greedy...I hope you continue both story lines! :-)
Raven
next chapter pls :)
i absolutely love this story...pls release the next chapter soon (hopefully within this week?)..:)
More, please!!!!!
Awesome story. You've got to write more and soon. I'm addicted to the characters and this story line. Bravo! Great job!
a rare treat indeed.
I have read a lot of vampire stories and seen more movies of them. You should keep on with this story. It is really good. The whole bad guy thing is all wonderful but to see the passion and beauty of something that is ordained evil...is remarkable.
I commend you on this story. I read the first one and begged for another chapter but never voiced or (typed) anything.
Now I am. I sort of study vampires as a hobby. Reading myths and legends constantly, comparing them, and seeking out some ounce of truth. It's what makes me a..nerd more or less.
Please do continue with this story.
this one this one this one!!!
I like how this is going!! YE HA! I really like these too and yeah he pushes the limits and all with his anger but at the same tme you want to feel sorry for him! I really love this story and find that since the first installment of leader of the pack is well "done" I am DEF getting more into these two!
Blow me away!
Rocks solidly!
OHHH!!!
This is great!!!! I love it! I have never read a story like this! It's so intriguging! I WANT more! I NEED more!!! You are really good at writing! I hope one day I may be as good as you!
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