Babysitting Perks

very sexy!

I certainly had my crushes on older men when I was that age, and I appreciate the story being sexy, not creepy!

Great

Loved it. I hope you plan to continue this story. I think it has great potential to be more than just one installment. Please continue!

Excellent

Please continue with more adventures for Anna and George.

this was hot!!!

I had more than a few fantasies about some of the dads I babysat for; but I was too chicken to do anything about it. Thanks for the story.

I can only wish that you guys would put ANAL in

your sub-titles--The whole story lacked realizm but the shit hole thing was above and beyond

Reminded me of younger days....

It brings back memories of fun times I had with a few of my favorite dads... and a few of the moms too....

I loved it, very well written, disregard the idiots who say things ugly just to be ugly.

Great. and very natural

The babysitter needs to develop a need to have his baby.

Very fine

A great first submission. I hope to read many more of your stories.

Very fine

A great first submission. I hope to read many more of your stories. I coud do without the anal business, though.

Hot and steamy

Excellent... well-written... thanks for sharing.

may I have another

I hope you have more material - that was excellent

Carry on babysitting

Loved the story, you must do more chapters and develop the character of Anna. Maybe George has some friends who would like to meet Anna, I'm sure Anna could handle a gangbang in the near future.

Great job! Wonderful fantasy!

Great job! I loved it.

More Please!!

Very hot and sexy! Good start with a lot of potential for an interesting relationship between these two. Looking forward to finding out what happens the morning after.

Great but better without the anal

Loved it until the anal stuff. A woman's cunt is for love and pleasure, her anus is for shitting.

WOW

Amazing! Loved it and can't wait for chapter 2!!

Wow

Where do I sign up for this babysitter? I really enjoyed the story. Great job. I hope you contine to write.

Loved it!

Well-written and extremely hot . . . a special fantasy brought to life by a talented writer. Thanks!

DAMN

Very HOT! I hope you find time to write more soon!

Squel?

I'd love a squel. I'll babysit if I get to babysit for Mr. Riley.

Stop.

Don, I've asked you to stop commenting with your rude comments on my stories. Just because you like pregnancy stories doesn't mean everyone does, and it's not my fault it's not in the anal category - I originally had it there and it was moved by the Lit admins. So stop already! I don't care if you don't like anal - go read something else instead of wasting your time on my stories, then! There's plenty of them out there that fit what you like, just leave me alone!

where is a mr riley for me?

This was AWESOME there are NEVER hot men to fuck while out babysittting...where does mr riley live? haha

Vivid Details

I especially enjoyed the vivid details. It brought this little encounter to life. Two come to mind: the mention of electric tit-to-clit connection that some women experience and the flushed chest of sexually-charged Anna.

And don't worry about the complaints about anal sex. A member search for females with "anal" as fetish yields a list of 1,975. Many women like to get filled up in various ways. Some like to get filled up in all three ways. ;-)

In the scenario of the story, the man doesn't have to worry about getting the babysitter pregnant if he pumps his hot seed up into her bowels instead of her pussy.

Fantastic story

You have incredible talent as a writer. Your story was erotic, the perfect fantasy written in a believable way. I loved it! I hope you write more soon.

Very well written!

I've read a couple of your other stories and find them extremely well written and with an enhanced realism.

I am amazed that the posters here who are so caught up in "natural sex" don't like your stories. Sometimes you just have to laugh when you realize that they protest the way they do because that's their "real" fetish.

Hot

A well-paced seduction and loved the anal climax.

Well-written and highly erotic

I loved the well-paced build up and accidental seduction. Your writing has a very natural feel to it. It was also easy to believe and enter into because of the realistic description of the house of the single father and situation with his son. The calm willingness and desire of your character is really arousing and I loved the anal climax. I hope you continue to follow your own sensibilities and not listen to the anal-haters (what do they have stuck up their butts anyway? there is plenty of other stuff to read). Anyway, I like your writing very much and look forward to your future efforts. I'd be very interested in knowing what you think of my recent series if you have the inclination to read it.

Quite good!

Basically well done. I do think It could be improved by slowing down the seduction, stretching it out a bit. This would build sexual tension in the characters AND in the readers.

Teen Ass-fucking?

This story could have been so much more erotic. I'm not sure that ass-fucking goes with fucking a teenaged baby-sitter because as that baby-sitter she should be more concerned with trying to have her own baby. In looking back at my own experiences as a teenager, ass-fucking was not in the desires of myself or the girl I was with, and ass-fucking would have gradually come along after some pregnancies and cuming in a hot pussy. I don't mean to be knocking your stories, but in this "fantasy" world or Literotica, it would seem that it would be much more erotic to be fucking a hot wet pussy in a teen, than sliding a hot dick up some shithole?

Exciting, fast paced and wonderful.

Fantastic,great pace and wonderful climax. I wasnt expecting the anal and it surprised me, but in a very good way. Thanks for a job well done. Your writing is pacey, sexy, surprising and leaves me wanting more. well done.
johnross1975

Oh Very hot

I hope she gets a regular job "babysitting".

Continue?

Next chapter?

MORE!

Loved it so so much and well developed story you have great talent and lots of sex appeal. PS the anal was very sexy no matter what anyone says IM A WOMAN AND WE LOVE ANAL

Very Nice!

This story is amazing and deserves a follow-up to it!

Great story

Beautifully written, good plot development also.

more

please?

I love this story. I hope you write another chapter!

Another great story.

I just love all your stories. Please write more of this!!

Great! Keep on writing em, LILY-ANN.

omg!

two of my three biggest fantasies are babysitters and anal...had she peed on him this story would have been perfect! well written and hot action. thank you.

Lovely tale

Thank you. Perfecty written.

Honest voice

Thanks, I really enjoyed this - particularly the sincere tone of the protagonist. A very sexy story, well-paced and very well told.

Very hot.

I normally don't like babysitter stories, they feel too contrived. But this was beautifully told and so very hot, I love that he wasn't cheating on his wife because she'd already left. Fantastic.

Good tail...er, uh tale.

I thought it was a 5 Star effort. Thank you.

anyone want to bed against this becumming her full time babysitting job?

;)

more babysitter perks

just read the story it was great you could do more chapters that would be great

So good! Well written with a believeable plot.

This is a delightful story, true to life feelings, lovely plot. Could have done without the anal, as I feel this may not have developed this early in the relationship. A strong suggestion toward a deeper relationship between the two adults, and a good connection between the young woman and little boy. This story just begs for more chapters! Thank you. GG

Love your stories!! A chapter 2 would be amazing.

oh yeah

I had an orgasm just reading this.

my wife at 18

Great story. Reminds me of my wife when we first started dating years ago. She used to babysit for a couple that worked different shifts. The husband always got home a few hours earlier, I guess she had a crush on this older man. When the kids were asleep he'd take my wife to the guest room and screw her.