There are other words to use in the English language. Try some of these: awesome, fascinating, incredible, marvelous, prodigious, shocking, stunning, surprising, unbelievable, wonderful. Otherwise a great, horny story.
Would love to read more about these two. Maybe she could even become a "live-in" babysitter.
As for the anal, a teen ass is perfect for anal! ;) And, in my experience, many younger (under 25) women DO enjoy anal. Many of them do worry about pregnancy, or want to "save themselves" for marriage, so they will give up the next best thing. A then 19 yo ex gf of mine actually preferred anal, as she said it was so naughty, as well as the intense feelings of it compared to vaginal sex.
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Anonymous11/28/13
More please! I loved this story!
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Anonymous12/01/13
really like the story
good characters and plot; comes across as though there's a sequel coming later
Nothing against the story; this is for the commenters, not ALL women like Anal. If you like it say so, but don't categorize ALL ... DKP
will be looking for more from you, THX
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Anonymous01/03/14
Oh!
Fucking sexy!
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Anonymous01/21/14
good memories
I have good memories from my babysitting days. In particular, I looked after my Dad's boss's children when I was a teenager. Dad's boss always came home a few hours before his wife and eat my pussy and fuck me till he filled my tight pussy with his CUM. He recently fucked me at his daughters wedding. mmmm
So if it was a blizzard, just how did Mr. Riley get home?
And then couldn't get/take Anna home?
As to the anal quite a few younger women do it to be sure to avoid pregnancy.
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Anonymous08/03/14
loved it.
I loved it. I would like to read more about these two like a live in baby sitter
And they could fuck there brains everyday before she goes off to school. And getting hot and big cock and getting paid for it. He would be fucking her hot little young pussy before going to work. So they both are getting there fuck on and its their big fucking secret. And the little boy has a women in the house to help make it not so hard on him because of his mom not being there for him. So everyones fucking all happy. I know I would love to in her shoes in a heart beat.
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Anonymous09/01/14
Great
There were only a few places you could have improved on.
The blizzard didn't make too much sense, how did he get home??
I also wish that you told us a bit more from Mr.Riley's perspective
Overall, amazing. Came so hard afterwards. Keep writing, you are really good.
4 stars
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Anonymous11/10/14
Read the story!
A couple of commenters have questioned how he got home and why he didn't take her home. He said the roads were bad so he could hardly get home [and the storm continued, so they were continually getting worse] and he would take her home but didn't want to wake his son [who would have to be dressed warmly to go out since he couldn't be left alone, and would be in serious danger if something happened to the car, especially returning].
It must be me, but I can't stand the idea of anal - I quit reading at that point. I like oral, but the idea of kissing a girl after she has sucked my shitty prick is disgusting. I admit, using a condom would make it a little better, but most of the time they're not using a condom, and as another commenter said, many girls do anal to avoid pregnancy [and condoms]. Also, while I haven't had anyone recently, i have never met a girl that didn't hate it. I never suggested it to my first wife, but the others made it clear that anal was not in the cards. It didn't make any difference to me anyway. I much preferred having a girl suck me off when I started to cum. My second wife usually managed to spill most of it on me so after swallowing the rest she had to lick up what she'd spilled, all the time watching me. She said she could cum just from the way I looked while she was doing that.
Author did a wonderful job writing a hot sex scene with an easy plot and simple but detailed character development. It's so obvious when an author takes the time to proof read before submitting. Thank you. Looking forward to reading more submissions from lily_ann.
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Anonymous12/22/14
write more
We need to see part 2,3,4...
Continue the affair. get her pregnant - more than once?
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Anonymous01/14/15
sexy babysitter
great story, imagine fucking her when she gets in from school, I can !! I need her to babysit for me, what is her phone number ?!
I loved it and would've love it more if there was a chapter about the morning after. Morning sex, breakfast together with Kyle. How she was more like a desirable wife than his ex.
Just great! I agree, followup chapters leading to her moving in with her 'old man', being called mommy, marrying the old guy ;)
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Anonymous01/13/16
Please a follow up of this story would be awesome
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Anonymous02/26/16
Wow!
You're a talented writer with great word choice, who was able to take something as old and done as fucking a young chick and make it into something completely intriguing, sensual, and memorable. Thank you for a fantastic read; I'm looking forward to much more from you.
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Anonymous03/07/16
Well done
In the sequel Mr. Riley quits he career and begins marketing her breast milk.
A story any male or female can relate to - especially his descriptive words on anal sex and for women, what I found they found enjoyable for their first time when done with ease and gentle entry. You again earn a five rate.
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Anonymous05/02/16
wet
i'm so wet right now. I just want to finger fuck my self
... with the ass fucking? It can be extremely enjoyable, for both partners, if done properly.
I know it's not for everyone, but don't knock it if you haven't tried it.
Admittedly, it was a bit odd for a first time between them, but she seemed to enjoy it.
English
Amazing...
There are other words to use in the English language. Try some of these: awesome, fascinating, incredible, marvelous, prodigious, shocking, stunning, surprising, unbelievable, wonderful. Otherwise a great, horny story.
Moan/groan
Good story except you seriously have to find any other word than moan or groan. For me, that ruined the whole story.
Pleeeeeease
Write a second chapter!!!
Please continue!
Would love to read more about these two. Maybe she could even become a "live-in" babysitter.
As for the anal, a teen ass is perfect for anal! ;) And, in my experience, many younger (under 25) women DO enjoy anal. Many of them do worry about pregnancy, or want to "save themselves" for marriage, so they will give up the next best thing. A then 19 yo ex gf of mine actually preferred anal, as she said it was so naughty, as well as the intense feelings of it compared to vaginal sex.
More please! I loved this story!
really like the story
good characters and plot; comes across as though there's a sequel coming later
Nothing against the story; this is for the commenters, not ALL women like Anal. If you like it say so, but don't categorize ALL ... DKP
will be looking for more from you, THX
Oh!
Fucking sexy!
good memories
I have good memories from my babysitting days. In particular, I looked after my Dad's boss's children when I was a teenager. Dad's boss always came home a few hours before his wife and eat my pussy and fuck me till he filled my tight pussy with his CUM. He recently fucked me at his daughters wedding. mmmm
yes
i would love to do anal with a girl
two things
So if it was a blizzard, just how did Mr. Riley get home?
And then couldn't get/take Anna home?
As to the anal quite a few younger women do it to be sure to avoid pregnancy.
loved it.
I loved it. I would like to read more about these two like a live in baby sitter
And they could fuck there brains everyday before she goes off to school. And getting hot and big cock and getting paid for it. He would be fucking her hot little young pussy before going to work. So they both are getting there fuck on and its their big fucking secret. And the little boy has a women in the house to help make it not so hard on him because of his mom not being there for him. So everyones fucking all happy. I know I would love to in her shoes in a heart beat.
Great
There were only a few places you could have improved on.
The blizzard didn't make too much sense, how did he get home??
I also wish that you told us a bit more from Mr.Riley's perspective
Overall, amazing. Came so hard afterwards. Keep writing, you are really good.
4 stars
Read the story!
A couple of commenters have questioned how he got home and why he didn't take her home. He said the roads were bad so he could hardly get home [and the storm continued, so they were continually getting worse] and he would take her home but didn't want to wake his son [who would have to be dressed warmly to go out since he couldn't be left alone, and would be in serious danger if something happened to the car, especially returning].
It must be me, but I can't stand the idea of anal - I quit reading at that point. I like oral, but the idea of kissing a girl after she has sucked my shitty prick is disgusting. I admit, using a condom would make it a little better, but most of the time they're not using a condom, and as another commenter said, many girls do anal to avoid pregnancy [and condoms]. Also, while I haven't had anyone recently, i have never met a girl that didn't hate it. I never suggested it to my first wife, but the others made it clear that anal was not in the cards. It didn't make any difference to me anyway. I much preferred having a girl suck me off when I started to cum. My second wife usually managed to spill most of it on me so after swallowing the rest she had to lick up what she'd spilled, all the time watching me. She said she could cum just from the way I looked while she was doing that.
Just right in so many ways
Author did a wonderful job writing a hot sex scene with an easy plot and simple but detailed character development. It's so obvious when an author takes the time to proof read before submitting. Thank you. Looking forward to reading more submissions from lily_ann.
write more
We need to see part 2,3,4...
Continue the affair. get her pregnant - more than once?
sexy babysitter
great story, imagine fucking her when she gets in from school, I can !! I need her to babysit for me, what is her phone number ?!
Chapter two please
I loved it and would've love it more if there was a chapter about the morning after. Morning sex, breakfast together with Kyle. How she was more like a desirable wife than his ex.
It definitely would be better if it was longer.
I just hope you are still around to continue it.
liked the closing line
then snuggled together body against body -- just an old man's dream
very captivating
Need to know what happened in the morning with lots of snow outside
Fantastic Story
So Sexy and Sensual. Very arousing and tantalizing. Would love to read more. Keep up the great work.
Yours,
JB
Excellent Story
And will be great with a follow up story telling about the next period of their lives.
Just great! I agree, followup chapters leading to her moving in with her 'old man', being called mommy, marrying the old guy ;)
Please a follow up of this story would be awesome
Wow!
You're a talented writer with great word choice, who was able to take something as old and done as fucking a young chick and make it into something completely intriguing, sensual, and memorable. Thank you for a fantastic read; I'm looking forward to much more from you.
Well done
In the sequel Mr. Riley quits he career and begins marketing her breast milk.
Enjoyable Reading
A story any male or female can relate to - especially his descriptive words on anal sex and for women, what I found they found enjoyable for their first time when done with ease and gentle entry. You again earn a five rate.
wet
i'm so wet right now. I just want to finger fuck my self
Great story
Literally fingering myself right now
Loved it
Anyone know where I can find a babysitter like her? lol
Wonderful
Except for the ass fucking
What was wrong ...
... with the ass fucking? It can be extremely enjoyable, for both partners, if done properly.
I know it's not for everyone, but don't knock it if you haven't tried it.
Admittedly, it was a bit odd for a first time between them, but she seemed to enjoy it.
And I enjoyed the story.
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