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champagne1982champagne1982over 16 years ago
Landscape

From an image you need to magnify a hundred times to capture nuance, you've built a tactile world. Holding hands made large. Excellent poem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Lovely again

as usual. Would my so latent touch be superglued onto that silken surface. BTW, I think it should be "rises" in line two ("Ridges and whorls" is the subject).

LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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I've got to go with that first comment, an excellent poem<br>

but<br>

{oh no, not the <b>but</b>}<br>

I think that the previous comment meant that for subject/verb agreement the word should be <i>rise</i> in line 2 and<br>

that extra 'e' changes a verb {envelop} into a noun {envelope} — I should know, I've done that myself!<br>

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