by Victoria_Lucas
From an image you need to magnify a hundred times to capture nuance, you've built a tactile world. Holding hands made large. Excellent poem.
as usual. Would my so latent touch be superglued onto that silken surface. BTW, I think it should be "rises" in line two ("Ridges and whorls" is the subject).
I've got to go with that first comment, an excellent poem<br>
but<br>
{oh no, not the <b>but</b>}<br>
I think that the previous comment meant that for subject/verb agreement the word should be <i>rise</i> in line 2 and<br>
that extra 'e' changes a verb {envelop} into a noun {envelope} — I should know, I've done that myself!<br>