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by LeBroz01/12/08

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Oh yes, this feeling I know so well. Even now, ten years since I saw her last, she still brings a soft smile to my lips and a lightness to my soul.

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by LeBroz01/12/08

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This poem was mentioned in Saturday's New Poems Reviews.


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by foehn201/13/08

Nice Exhibition of Verbal Skill

Yes; this was very nice. In particular, I liked the way the more verbose lines contrasted with the lines of only one word. The diction was clear, the tone was uniform; the language simple, but not plain. Excellent work.

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