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WHHHAAAATTTT?????
is the purpose of your ramblngs?
Get the names straight.
With this format, if you don't get the names straight it will be very confusing. Are Ray and Jake the same person or two different people?
Whoever Told This "Writer" She Could Write
...lied. There is simply nothing about this "story" to recommend it.
Not worth reading
This must be another brain dead author writing garbage. It seems that all these whacko authors are all crawling out of the woodwork lately on this site. I presume nobody monitors what is being posted anymore. What a shame, I use to enjoy literotica.
Confused
If Jake is the husband who is Ray?
thanks people, but i think you might be confused..
Let me clear this up. First of all, Ray is my friend who was writing this story with me. His name appears before each part that he wrote. Jake is the name of Ray's Character in the story. I would appreciate any input that you might have to help me make this story better, please send me a private message about that if you want. and I am not "another brain dead author" as an anonymous commenter seems to think. many of my friends have enjoyed reading this story. If you dont like it, dont comment on my story! Thanks!
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