I am telling you all again: Ray and Bunnie are the writers, myself and my friend Ray. Crystal and Jake are our characters in the story. I did my story this way so the readers could see which part was done by Ray and which part I wrote. If you dont like my story, please DO NOT comment!
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Anonymous01/17/08
Tough
I hated your "story," not that it was much of a "story." On a scale of 1 to 10, this story earns a -6. That's because you have exactly zero skills as a writer and you need to take several years of writing classes before you waste bandwidth submitting another text to this website. Oh, and you can't stop us from making bad comments unless you wimp out and turn off comments entirely. LOL
English
just as bad as part 1
Is it Ray and Bunnie or Crystal and Jake?
Really dumb
Suggest he study by reading some good stuff before writing again
clarification AGAIN....
I am telling you all again: Ray and Bunnie are the writers, myself and my friend Ray. Crystal and Jake are our characters in the story. I did my story this way so the readers could see which part was done by Ray and which part I wrote. If you dont like my story, please DO NOT comment!
Tough
I hated your "story," not that it was much of a "story." On a scale of 1 to 10, this story earns a -6. That's because you have exactly zero skills as a writer and you need to take several years of writing classes before you waste bandwidth submitting another text to this website. Oh, and you can't stop us from making bad comments unless you wimp out and turn off comments entirely. LOL
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