All Comments on 'Virtual Reality: Dragon Quest'

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grizxgrizxabout 16 years ago
a fun read

I throughly enjoyed the charachters and am looking forward to seeing some of your other works.

darussiandarussianover 8 years ago
Story = ok. But sex scenes? Wtf

Seriously?

Ok, for you budding writers of erotica. Next time you're about to have sex, please tell your partner "I'm about to push my thrusting cock into your wet heat and you should blur your hands over your sopping bud so you cum". See how that works for you and then get real.

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