All Comments on 'Grandpa: After Molly Ch. 06'

by MisterReason

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Billydee2Billydee2about 16 years ago
YOU BLEW IT

You had a good story going until now and you ruined it entirely. How stupid can you get.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
I disagree

I like the story and am not fazed by the plot turns. It's a story - not just a recanting of sex acts, so may require reading skills.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This one turned a corner

Liked all the other stories, they were great. This turn seems like a bad idea, its not hot or especially exciting, plus all the great things your main character had going for him turned to mush- where's his integrity or care for the girl like before? Aint no way that guy would let this stuff happen. What happened to all his years of wisdom and experience vs some dumb kid with a lame blackmail bit a cell phone? I dont know, I just wish this chapter didnt exist.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
good story

where is part 7 i wanna finish reading the story

MisterReasonMisterReasonalmost 16 years agoAuthor
Hello

I apologize. I thought I had successfully submitted the final chapter of this story before needing to have a health issue taken care of. I see that for some reason - probably a screw-up on my part because I'm a computer idiot - it not only isn't up, the whole thing seems to have vanished. I'm sorry about this, and if I can't find out where it went I will redo it. Sorry again - because I know waiting for part stories is a pain, and I thank you for your patience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
GRAMDPA AFTER MOLLY CH.6

EVERY CHAPTER UP TIL NOW HAS BEEN GREAT, THIS ONE YOU FUCK UP ON

I DIDN'T LIKE GANG RAPES BUT I DO LIKE HAPPY ENDINGS,YOU COULD GET

AMANDA IN A STORY WITH GRANDPA OR SOMETHING IT SOUNDS LIKE SHE COULD DO GRAMDPA FOR QUITE SOME TIME ,OR MAYBE TIL LINDSEY OR MOLLY COME BACK ON THE SEEN

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Way to mess up a good story

Well. This sucks. A great story ruined

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

wow wow wow. Thank you MisterReason.

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