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Day the Earth Moved

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/18/08

Ummm...

Isn't this exactly the same as your previous story shell shocked?

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by sr71plt01/18/08

Yep

To the last comment: Yep, it is. I'm impressed (and flattered) that you made the connection--especially since I hadn't remembered the "Shelled Shocked" one was posted here myself. This one is actually the original version--and the shell shocked one was a later rework to fill a military slot on another Web site. Sorry about that, but stories are repurposed for fresh audiences--and it's a good exercise for writers to find new angles for material. I hope my offerings overall don't shortchange readers. (There's a completely new one coming up in a couple of days.)

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by Anonymous01/19/08

Self-plagiarism?

Actually, from what I recall, "Day the Earth Moved" was the original story when I first read it on Nifty or one of those other sites -- then was re-written as "Shell Shocked." For what it's worth, I think this version is superior.

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by Anonymous01/20/08

Write a Sequel!

I read it before too. Whatever the name, it's a hot story!

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by Anonymous06/20/08

Cum On My Stomach

Don't care if it's plagiarism or not. It made me cum all over my stomach.

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