by Victoria_Lucas
Beyond the humor and wearing your volunrability on your sleeve which I liked, it was also interesting to note that the age old motive: 'had I been objectified' as awoman is still strong and compelling question, no matter how hip and agressive you may be...
Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thank you for the read.
You need a good sense of humour and balance to make love in a single bed
Effortlessly constructed, weighing humour and pathos. Loved it, loved it.
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